PLEASE RATE ME OUT OF 5 Stars in the comments so I can add it into the description!

First person to comment gets a guaranteed spot, into the description whether it's a bad review or a good one.

(I love constructive criticism!)

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While I have you here what did you think? How'd I do? I've never written a short story before so it's a bit lengthy...

Any feedback back? Anything you'd like to know about the characters? their relationship? Etc?

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