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Song: Nobody Move, Nobody Get Hurt by We Are Scientists

You’re probably saying to yourself “Why is no one reading my story? I mean it’s so good!” But have you ever thought to stop and look at it? People don’t like to read stories when the typing is like this:

‘I was at me home look down the road it was yellow and red and ugly but I loved it it reminded my of u’

Yeah. Even though that made no sense at all some people write like that. Well, it PISSES PEOPLE OFF! No one wants to read something that gives them headaches.

Want to know the problems? It’s a run on sentence. It’s just so obnoxious. There are extremely basic words and its ‘me’ instead of ‘my’ and ‘you’ instead of ‘u’

So you want to know how to fix it? Well writing like you went through elementary school is the first step.

 You always capitalize names and places. Don’t forget to end sentences with a period. And it’s ‘you’ not ‘u’

Also try seeking out an editor. You can look for one in the ‘Wattpad Editors’ section.  There are some great people out there who know how to edit things and make them a lot better!

Is there something that’s making you mad? Want someone to write about it? Well just PM me your idea and I’ll write a piece on it or submit your own writing and I might use it. Have a song or picture you want to sumbit for picture or song of the week? Go ahead! PM! And i'll use it! So what are you waiting for? It’s time to rant! It’s time to complain! So get to it!