New important thing because I'm a terrible writer. If you see italics that means it's Selena's POV/Mind cuz yeah.
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      Brooklyn. The place kept crossing my mind that rest of the night. Everyone is just.... terrified of it. My darn father.... ya know the big pulitzer "I run New York ha ha" dude. He always kept me and Kathrine in Manhattan and for the life of fortune. Although somehow my amazingly bright older sister was hired and achieved her goals. I want to be like my sister. She is very smart and tale- "GAHHHHHHHH"

I look to my right and see it's him again. I rush over to lesses bunk and put my hand over his mouth. "Dude use HAVE gots to stop having nightmares. Ya almost woke da other guys up and we don't needs to wake for another 2 hours!" Hisssed Snake.

       "Sorry snake, that Brooklyn is really worring me." Snake pats the young child's back and tuck him in.
       "I knows, but youse need to sleep. Night less."
Less yawned in response as he dozed off.

      "EVERYBODY UP" screeched Jack. "We have all gots a huge days aheada us. Today we are takin' a trip to Brooklyn! Spot Conlon has asked us to join da Brooklyn newsies in resolving some past turf disagreements. We have accepted and will leave no later than 7, so that tomorrowse we ain't loosen a days pay. Y'all got dat?"
Many groans are heard out of the tired boys. Some slap there CAPS above there face to avoid the sunlight from the newly opened window, while other walk like zombies to put on there boots.

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Does anyone read these? I have a whole plot line that will take at least 12-20 more chapters.