River - Joke OC by VioletTurtleDragon

Name: River

kay

Gender: Female

okay

Tribe: Rainwing/Seawing

nice

Appearance: Bulky Seawing body with frail Rainwing like talons and tail, She also has a Rainwing-like frill with Seawing horns and head, Emerald green scales with light blue undertones and deep green eyes

this sounds... awkward

Abilities: Animus, Can see in the dark, Prehensile tail, Excellent swimmer though she has trouble walking

tone it down there bud. you have WAYYYY too many "good" qualities, which is complimented by only ONE bad quality. 

Mask Appearance: Seawing body, Rainwing head, frill, talons, tail, wings, Usually has green scales with a tint of blue, Lime green glow scales, Frill is usually dark red fading into bright orange, Her talons have webbing, Deep, dark green eyes with pitch black pupils like something is slowly eating her from the inside out, The mask is hidden in a silver tailband

oh god nostop this

Mask Abilities: Can breathe underwater, Can spit venom, Can change scale color, Excellent swimmer, Can see in the dark, Animus

 NOOOOOO THAT'S EVEN WORSE

Other: Hates Rainwings, Stays up all night to prove she isn't lazy but will fall asleep during the day only to be woken up and called lazy by the dragon who woke her up, She hates being called lazy, She can't walk without the mask

NO


OVERALL SCORE: .5/10

POINTS DEDUCTED REASONING: This OC is awful! and a perfect representation of how NOT to make an OC. :DD


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