Withered With Hurt ~ Reader's Window~

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Thank You For Choosing This Story

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~ Withered with hurt ~

Reader's Window

Hello My Lovely Readers...

This Part is solely dedicated to my wonderful readers, who took time to read this book and make it a success ... Here a short glimpse of my Amazing Readers and their opinion about this story...

I apologize at the beginning that It was not possible to includes all the comments, motivational words given by you.. Don't feel bad if you don't find your name here.. I truly appreciate all of my readers who has commented, voted , all the silent readers and all of those readers who gave positive criticism and also those readers who left the story midway...

Everyone of you made this story a success.. and help me to grow as a writer..

Thanks....

So...

Here it goes....

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Few heartwarming Private messages...

blackpearlzz

Blackpearlzz  :  Hi...after reading your this story I thought to message you... Your writing skills are awesome, I really appreciate it.. and almost every chapter I was literally crying, seriously I could not control my tears and it was damn emotional whether it was Khushi's emotion or Arnav's it was so good... Keep up your writing.. all the best for your Future FFs..

With Love...

KeerthiRajkumar

KeerthiRajkumar : Hi, I am a silent reader of your stories... You might think Why I am messaging you suddenly.. I just read your story WWH, I never read a story with so much pain and hurt, I always read happy stories, but still I read this one and I loved it...I am not a communicator, but after reading this , I felt like telling you how fabulous the story was... It really felt awesome, I don't know why you wrote this story, what gave path to such a story line but it really felt different and so many other...

I wanted to say so much after reading it but I am not a writer and not good with words so all that I want to say is, " this story really touched my heart YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER"... keep up the good work...

Bye...

Fabgirl2468

Fabgirl2468 : I really love your story WWH... You have wonderfully described it... I really appreciate your affort.. never affect yourself with nevetive comments because people always have point out something... You skill of writing is beautiful.. so always be positive...

prenii_aryal

Prenii_aryal...Hatts off Dii....The way you describe each emotion in your story is just wow... I read the new chapter of Withered and from last 30 minutes I am unable to think any other thing except Khushi's pain.. It feels like it has happened to me...

SURABRAD

SURABRAD : Hi...I am here with my feedback on WWH.. Hats off to you for being a fabulous writer, picking up a plot and make it real...very real and logical...Your narration is complelling... let me tell you for me it's roller coster ride whenever I read it's updates.. Its very agonizing and heartbreaking just to read what Khushi is going through.. feel disgusted to what level Arnav stooped down to satisfy to his ego...I don't blame Sheetal here as anybody in her place with a motive of personal gain would do the same given the treatment of Arnav and his family towards Khushi... You are doing a fabulous job with the plot... Continue with the original plot ... Looking forward eagerly what you have planned.. Once again congratulations for being original, real and human in shaping up your plots... Cheers...

Rekha_ty

Rekha_ty  : Thank you for taking time to write...

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Opinion of my Writer Friends on wattpad...

mridita

Mridita : It ended.. I am really sad but as well as happy. Though the story was fiction but it really had the touch of reality. It's close to my heart as it's one of those story which I had started at the starting of my wattpad journey....I loved the development of Arnav's character. But the most favourite character of ine was Aarav all along with Khushi of course. On the other hand Khushi here was someone whom I really wanted to see in the show. Atleast and atlast she stood for herself, her self respect. I will miss the whole story.. Time for re-revising...

Mistydoe

Mistydoe  : Good..

Springoceania

Springoceania  : Lovely ending.. Arnav and Khushi have come a long way.. This ending instills hope in us.. That all is not lost.. Hope in the only flower that never fades, never withered.. A flower that had withered with hurt is now blooming with hope.. Wonderful... thank you so much for much a wonderful thought provoking story..

SriSsv

SriSsv: Not enough words to express the beauty of the story.. Thank you..


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Views and Opinion of my Lovely Readers...

rd_774998

rd_774998: This was hands down one of the best books I have read, especially the portrayal of characters and emotions.

AlomiaCG

AlomiaCG : You have taken me on a journey beyond my imagination.. This is a remarkable story, the emotional construction of it beautifully woven together, that I failed to express the essence of it. Thank you of letting us in your life of storytelling. You are an exceptional writer..

Sanscar69

Sanscar69 : Dear Soumya, lovely story... just can not get enough of your stories, your writing style, analysis of the character and I could go on.. Keep writing, as you writers are my solace during every hectic work schedule.. Your works are my place to go after an 14 hours day.. DIL SE THANKS...

Alaeca9

Alaeca9 : Read it in one go... fell in love with this story...

AnushkaBiswas440

AnushkaBiswas440..Mamree seriously I don't know what to say.. Your writing has truly touched my heart...

Dolores959

Dolores959 : Your story was wonderful and well written. I must admit that there were times that I just had to stop reading and walk away.. I can not count the times that I just wanted to jump into your story and kick some butt. My emotions were all over the place. that's just how your story made me feel. you told it well. Thanks again..

BSRaizada

BSRaizada.. Awesome...

oupashna

Oupashna : This story truly strikes at the heartstrings with emotions so raw and alive, it just blows my mind away with it's intensity..The way you bring each emotion so raw so alive, it just simply magical in its own way..

itsmehg

Itsmehg : Loved the story. Completely new prospective of Sheetal track..

Brunz4ever

Brunz4ever : Good...

priya9897652342

priya9897652342 : You nailed it. I absolutely loved how everything got wrapped so well.

Dreamieworld

Dreamieworld : I am speechless..

Caps156

Caps156 : Thanks for making Khushi voice out her thoughts...

wanieAnammly

wanieAnammaly : I know I don't comment but each chapter are total madness yaar.. Hatts off to your creative mind..

Alsha21

Alsha21 : Awesome.. I have no words to describe...

Zingimancotywa

Zingimancotywa : I love the story twice.. wow.. I love the way you writes..

pamalovearshi

Pamalovearshi  : This is definitely one of my all time favourites now.. I think I have read an arshi story so mature and real in so many ways.. in the start the emotional upheavals that you gave us made me think this story is like soo many good arshi stories that were heart wrenching but beautiful.. But this one is different.. all the aspects you tried conveying in the last few chapters made it unique... and the way you did it is worth all the praise.. Loved the open ending, but may be not the open because it leaned more towards Arshi getting back together.. First I prefer otherwise in this story and thought it will elevate the story more for me but the way you wrote made me love the other possibilities equally.. It made me realize this is true for so many relationship... I don't need to feel all feminist about it.. appreciated your writing for that... people do make mistakes , they do change, some move on but some find heart to move on together as well... Its real life.. You have portrayed it all brilliantly.. loved this one and hope you give us more like this one in future... and lastly I really really loved this one... this is special and don't know if I was able to tell you how much I appreciate all the things you said in this story... Thank you...

maanmeet1

Maanmeet1 : You have included and explained everything so precisely and amazingly.. the song does justice to their situation.. No words will give proper appreciation to what you have penned down.. It was an amazing experience.. different take on our beloved Arnav and Khushi.. No doubt I am going to miss it so much..

pajanjalir

paianjalir : I love the open ending.. sometimes people can remain friends if they can not crossover to a couple again or fall in love again due to the changed circumstances. I love that even Arnav seek help.. It is important for people to understand that toxic relationship may seems interesting, romantic and all that possessiveness may look good onscreen when is fed by stupid movies and ITV but in reality it is respect , love, trust and communication that sustains a relationship...It is important for a woman to have a identity of her own apart from different roles.. In a relationship one must grow individually too else one partner feels smothered at some point. Relationship needs to worked on all the time even if it's marriage or siblings. Beautiful story, love how mental health importance is highlighted..

lathaish

Lathaish : Hi Soumya, you have written it so beautifully... I am lost for words.. Your take on the story is so much more realistic than what we saw on the show .. It is more relatable.. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story...

SuppMudi

SuppMudi : An open ended story feels real.. I appreciate your thoughts.. The last few chapters were really fast paced, but really enjoyed reading it... The psychological healing part is really worth reading.. All this while it felt Khushi is withered but Arnav was withered the most.. Nice twist in the part... Keep writing... would love to read more of your work.. All the best...

ArshianMukherjee

ArshianMukherjee : One of the best story I have ever read, not only in #Arshi category but overall the storyline. Thank you Author for this beautiful journey..

canapoem

Canapoem..Very nice ending.. Khushi found herself and today she is happy.. same goes to Arnav too.. he is finally happy within himself.. he is at peace and the demons of his past are all gone.. I hope that Khushi is giving Arnav another chance and the reason I felt is, even after all this she did stay with Arnav in one house and she silently gave Arnav support to heal along with she making a life for herself. The trust they have built together is what will help their relationship in future too and like Arnav said, even if she decides to part, he will support her.. it will hurt Arnav but he will let her go wishing her all the well. Not sure if we really need another human being to be happy, but it is also true that human beings need love to live. I do hope they find love whith each other or without each other...

Nice story and congrats on the completion of this story. I hope you write an original fiction next. It will be very interesting to read a new story with no preconceived notions or expectations.

TuhinaRoy6

TuhinaRoy6 : I will miss it most..I don't know what the ending you thought but this one which you gave was awesome.. I just lived with it... You became my inspiration to write something.. Thank you for writing..

YDANita

YDANita : Well written story.. the concept is mind blowing and you handeled it very well.. Keep up the good work.. I will surely read it again...

Violet1510

Violet 1510 :Amazing story.. Even though the entire story was a sad one but I really enjoyed reading it.. I like how you showed that life is not perfect, every human makes mistakes..

perry_mysticforce

Perry_mysticforce : I am glad you keep open ending. I was fearing what ending you will give. But this ending is good. All the best for your next stories too.

Razz03

Razz03 : Just few words... beautufl bloomed hearts

Mayamadhuvanthi

Mayamadhuvanthi : Loved this ending totally different concept, it may be sheetal track but you showed us different limelight about them..

Arshilogics

Arshilogics : Amazing... another remarkable journey of arshi ended.. thanks for writing beautiful story..

Jinny_Tanya_Tani

Jinny-Tanya-Tani : One of the most beautiful story I have ever read. Utterly mesmerizing the story captures the emotions of the person beautifully. I cried with this story but it was all worth it. An amazing roller coaster ride..

Gauripjoshi

Gauripjoshi : I am loving this open end..What an interesting and innovative writer you are dear.. Just pat your back on behalf of me..

Merlin_16

Merlin_16 : Emotional happy ending. Good ending .. Loved this story so much.. Thanks for giving us amazing ride throughly.

Ymashaibsule

Ymashaibsule : It was a beautiful journey with lots of emotional personal this one of my favourite.

Danity2016

Danity2016 : Wow great story, I am going to miss you so much.. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

KSK-123

KSK-123 :Awesome.. Its really a beautiful book and very emotional also I love ur every stories do write more stories..

Levyrroni12

Levyrroni12 : Wow... you really touched my heart with this story.. Thanks...

Arch1885

Arch1885 : Lovely and fitting end of this story..

Xtgvjjnmk

Xtgvjjnmk : Superb.. Its very emotional and the change in Arnav is really nice and the ending is really good..

Nilimamalladi

Nilimamalladi : Really loved this ending.. it being open I can twist it as I want, depending on my mood.. Actually I did not want them to be together, but after seeing the changes in Arnav, I feel he deserve a last chance..

user23549805

User23549805 : Congratulations darling.. You have completed another beautiful fanfiction...

JiniPatwani

JiniPatwani : Beautiful story.. Gave many lessons and touched hearts.. Thank you for this masterpiece.

Rags2020

Rags2020 : Story was really Good.

Juhi190

Juhi190 : Thank you for this beautiful concept

Aathy143

Aathy143 : Mind blowing dear

Juhilily

Juhilily : Wow... such an amazing ending.. I will miss the story..

Garimasrivasatava

Garimasrivasatava : I truly appreciate your way to finish this as open ending because after everything I too did not want them as lovey dovey couple but as a mature person

bhargavi13

Bhargavi13 : How it ended am so happy

ranogill

Ranogill : Awesome end. 

gameliesther : It was awesome gameliesther

Suma_Arshi

Suma_ Arshi : Amazing story...

BonyModi

BonyModi : Nice Story

Neenavinayan

Neenavinayan : Loved it..

sowjanya1309

Sowjanya1309 : Really amazing story..

ilfordian

Ilfordian : Thank you mamree for this story..

AminaTaliep3

AminaTaliep3 : Wow can't believe this story is at an end.. Brilliantly written story..

SanaAli878

SanaAli878 :Awesome

maleseli

Maleseli : Oh what a journey, thank you so much for this lovely story.. I am going to miss this story...

nidhichaudhari93

Nidhichaudhari93 : Awesome..

ReenaSungeelee

ReenaSungeelee : Awesome..

Funschool

Funschool : Awesome awesome awesome... I love how Arnav did change genuinely. I love how Khushi changed amazingly.. The way they broke and healed... It brought the whole story together...

Samab28

Samab28 : I am not going to say it's awesome or nice or good.. It's beautiful too much beautiful..

Fermeen30

Fermeen30.. : Loved..

Jakarayi

Jakarayi : Awesome... Ending was supereb..

nilmiRH

nilmiRH : Amazing story.. loved it..

Zaruis

Zaruis : Awesome keep it up

GenuteVaisviliene

GenuteVaisviliene : Thank you so much for this very very interesting and super good story..

Keneuoemonese

Keneuoemonese : Nice and painful story

rkala1524

rkala1524 : Glad you kept an open ending.

RajeshNayak5

RajeshNayak5 : My favourite story ended..

Kiran72

Kiran72 : Lovely...

Dhayaram

Dhayaram : Wow what a fabulus ending to a fantabulous story. Thank you.

EkaV01

EkaV01 : With love.. very good ending dear..well done..

YamunaSowmya

YamunaSowmya : Amazing loved it

FransikaHamar

FransikaHamar :Awesome dear and will miss this story so much..

Sushilabiyani

Sushilabiyani :Awesome ending..

History_Lover1234

History_Lover1234 :Beautiful ending

VeenuDhawan

VeenuDhawan : Beautiful and lovely

Naflabanu

Naflabanu : Super ending..

Forumlove

Forumlove : Overall the story has been phenomenal

vaishliPatel7

VaishliPatel7 :Awesome plot

Samiksha198

Samiksha198 : Good...

Priyam18

Priyam18 : Fantastic

Divan_arshi

Divan_arshi : Enjoyed it..

Vigneshch

Vigneshch : Very nice.. all your story are beautiful

Jia213

Jia213 : Beautiful.. Loved it..

Mnirocks

Mnirocks : Beautiful... LOVED YOUR BOOK..

Shils28

Shils28 : Fabulous

Kousygnanam

Kousygnanam :Mind blowing ..

palaniSujan

palaniSujan :good.

Avninani

Avninani : Superb

JineshShibi

JineshShibi : Thank you so much for this beautiful story

Garimaaggarwal

Garimaaggarwal : Superb ending..

Anrawsnarayan

Anrawsnarayan : Awesome story..

Sheetsii

Sheetsii : Such a beautiful story..Nice ending.. will miss reading this story.. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story.. lots of love and blessing to you and your family.. Stay safe and take care...

vishi86

Vidhi86 : Everyone has to respect everyone feeling, not to taken for granted..

Isvasu

Isvasu : Superb

Jeb102

Jeb102 : Its was beautiful ending..

ShireenRahman4

ShireenRahman4 : Nice ending..

Rose_crazysoul

Rose_crazysoul : Nice ending loved this story.. Thank you for giving us such a beautiful story..

Maramaaaaaa

Karamaaaaaa : Beautiful..

PankajaRamakrishna

PankajaRamakrishna : Loved it

User96640047

User96640047 : Amazing story, very different from all the others.. Fabulous read..Thanks..

Nandrajogdivya

Nandrajogdivya : Awesome

KhatijahJalil

KhatijahJalil : Fabulous ..

Rabbaarnie

Rabbaarnie : Awesome..

Rumpa321

Rumpa321 : Thanks thanks Mamree for the amazing story.. Khushi got her justice like never before..

ishitasharma

Ishitasharma : Awesome

sharonmakhuleni

Sharonmakhuleni : Thanks mamree for a beautiful story, you are one of kind..

elieli_lid

Elieli_lid : Awesome... thank you for this story..

crenapaul

Crenapaul : I was tearing as I read through the chapters.. Beautifully written..

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Here is a small glimpse of Readers thought's regarding this story...

It was not possible to include everyone's comment... Please don't get it by heart... I am grateful for all of your support, love and motivation to complete this story...

Special thanks to ishqdinoorhai3 and HritaAkashi

And a hearty welcome to new readers of this story....

Your storyteller..

mamree

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