Sandstorm
Name - Sandstorm
Good name! Don't see it that often.
Tribe - SandWing/IceWing
Interesting!
Age - 6
Normal.
Sexuality - Straight
Again, good.
Personality - Sandstorm is rude to most SandWings (find out why later), but does have a few friends. She is very outspoken and likes to make herself heard. She doesn't back down from a challenge easily, but sometimes over estimates herself greatly. She is also quite sensitive, taking things to heart. She also hates the heat of the desert.
Good, everything flows together nicely.
Residence - Scorpion Den
Good.
Appearance - Sandstorm looks like any other SandWing. She is large, tall and intimidating. Her claws are long and sharp, and her scales are a soft orange colour, and they shift a little to amber in the bright sunlight. Her eyes are IceWing blue, though.
I think that Icewings have pure, black eyes.
Mate - Sandstorm doesn't have a mate, or a crush, due to her dislike of SandWings. But she develops a crush on an IceWing she meets named Snow.
Awh!
Family - Mother : Princess Blaze (told you she was a stretch) // Father : Frostbite // Adopted Mother : Viper (SandWing) // Adopted Sister : Serpent
Eh, kind of. I've seen worse. I Love serpent, and Vipers canon, but she ded.
Abilities - Normal SandWing powers, like venomous tail and all that, but she also has frostbreath, though she can't use it unless she is in a cold place.
Eh, I would recommend removing the frostbite, and maybe make that tail only half poisonous.
Backstory - Sandstorm was an accident, because Blaze fell in love with an IceWing, and they conceived an egg. When Blaze saw that her dragonet looked like a SandWing, she knew that she couldn't live in the Ice Kingdom, so she sent her to live with her friend Viper. Sandstorm knew she was Blaze's daughter, because the SandWing princess came to visit a lot.Sandstorm was reasonably happy when she was alone in her room, or around her small group of friends. But she hated being around the SandWings, and disliked the hot, stuffy desert. She never went to school, well she did for a little while, but she was bullied because of her blue eyes, so Viper pulled her out. Serpent, who was also different, due to her venom being in her fangs instead of her tail, was one of Sandstorm's closet friends. All the dragonet ever wanted was to live in the Ice Kingdom. She asked around, and heard of a dragon named Soar who floated around the place sometimes. She went on a hunt for him, because she had heard he could change her into an IceWing. She took some gold and ran away from home. She finally found him, and he gave her a necklace like thing that turned her into an IceWing, though she was still herself. She finally went to the Ice Kingdom, and told her mother anything. She then lived there as Shiver, an escaped prisoner of Queen Scarlet. She also fell in love with an IceWing names Snow, and they soon became in a relationship.
Awh! But, my problems.
-blue eyes.
Serpents venom in her fangs. Really cool, but it ain't probable.
Soar! I love my chameleon <3 (this ain't bad lmao)
Anywho, I really liked Sandstorm. But, I have an idea for you to make her more probable.
-Sandstorm is biologically related to Viper and Frostbite.
-Viper kicks her out because of the unwanted affair.
-Blaze adopts her after the war.
-she is bullied for being the stepdaughter of the "weakest" Sandwing sister and afraid of her identity, she flys away.
-she eventually stumbles into soar, who, takes her under her wing for a week. He learns her secret and offers to help her out. He turns her into a full Icewing. She goes to the ice kingdom, meets snow, and the rest is yours.
Just an idea. (:
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