name : blizzard
Kind of used, but ok.
tribe : icewing
Yay!
age : 10
Good.
personality : blizzard is very sweet and kind. he isn't harsh. He is helpful and likes doing medical work
A bit vague, but is a good start.
appearance : a dark blue on the top. he has a light blue belly and a black necklace with a skull on it
Still a bit vague, but ok.
family :mother :skullfather : snowstormhalf-sisters : violet, sunset, icelightmate : ice crack
Hm. Ice crack should be 'Icecrack' as the IceWings don't separate names.
Abilities : blows a deathly frost breath, sharp claws and teeth
Good. Normal stuff.
back story: when he was born skull was making aband of 7th circle icewing rouges. he was trained as a guard and a medic. Later when violet a ice wing half rain wing he knew it was his sister. after skull killed snake he was outraged. after his friend komodo killed her he went to jade mountain with her and he friends and became a medic in the rain forest!
I'm a bit confused. How did he know that Violet was his half sister. And who's snake? Who's Komodo? How did he get to Jade Mountain so quickly? Extremely rushed backstory, but a good start.

My rating|| 5-10