Name:Autumn
Good. Original, and fitting.

Tribe:SkyWing/IceWing
Cool! Haven't seen it before.

Age:19
Good, out of the common age range.

Sexuality:straight
Good.

Personality:Autumn is serious and hates the IceWIngs for kicking her out. She is a loyal SkyWing, still terrified if Queen Cherry may kill her for being animus. She is smart and quick-witted, but sometimes thinks instead of acting.
Animus....
Sorry, you've lost me here. Skywings Hate Animi And Icewings don't have any.

Appearance:Orange-red SkyWing, with barely any IceWIng parts, %90 of her family was SkyWing. Cherry has many wing scratches, and a normal tail. She has big wings, and likes to blow smoke. Her eyes are blue, because she has Icewing blood.
Blow smoke?

Mate:BlizzardFamily: Mother:RedFather: Hail
I'm questioning the name red lmao

Abilities:breathe fire, fly quickly, survive low temperatures and ice attacks, animus
Ice attacks? Animus again.

Backstory:As a tiny dragonet, Autumn was born animus. Her father had the magic too.
There it is. But, it would make much more sense if the mother had the animus powers, and ran away from her kingdom.
She was out-cast by her tribe mates. Her only friends were Snow, a nice dragon, and BLizzard, an annoying dragon. He got on Autumn's nerves, by being nice to her, then saying she was ugly when his father came.
FIGHT ME BLIZZARD
Finally, Autumn had enough of the IceWing's treatment.
You go girl.

She left the tribe and went to the SkyWings, being welcomed because her mother was a high-ranked general. Even though she was an animus, Queen Cherry did not kill her, because she was very useful. In her new tribe, she made two new friends, Sunset, a 25 percent rainwing, very beautiful, and a cheerful dragon, Crimson. Then, tragic struck.
"And tragic struck." Cliché, but it fits.
Her mother died, killed by an IceWing. Autumn wanted to avenge her death, leaving, only to find her friend-enemy, Blizzard.
*growls*
The two dragons traveled together, and grew close over time. They had on dragonet,
AWH! CAN I BE THE GODMOTHER!
an animus named Robin. Robin grew with the SkyWings, and Blizzard came too. He had to prove his loyalty over and over, SkyWings did not like Icewings. Finally, after one year and two moons, things were how they should've been. Sunset married Crimson, and stayed friends with Autumn. Robin grew to a strong dragon. And now, Autumn knew she loved her life and her tribe.
YES I LOVE THIS.

A few problems, and then your good!

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