Waterfall

Name_Waterfall

 Age_7 

Gender_female

 Tribe_rainwing/seawing

 Appearance_all slim bodied like a rainwing, with sapphire blue scales with aquamarine underbelly. She has the seawing frills and webs. She does have the venom fangs. She has a rainwings tail. But she has the aquatic spots. All her scales change colour but only through the various shades of blue and green. Her eyes are coral pink.

 Personality_ Waterfall is loud and out spoken, she doesn't like to sleep at suntime and because of this and her scales 'predicament' she gets weird looks from the other rainwings. Also because of this she tends to not care what others think of her. She learnt to be hard-headed. 

Abilities_ Waterfall has the flashing aquatic lights, can breath underwater, has night vision and venom. She is also an animus. I think she is a little over powered.. Most  hybirds,  including Sunny, don't have all the traits of both tribes

 Occupation_ She is a student at Jade Mountain Academy. (If she was in the sea-kingdom, she would be a Princess-more on that in backstory. 

Residency_ Lives in the rainforest when she isn't at the academy. 

Family_ Mother-Queen Coral Father Chameleon. Half-Sisters- Peril, Anemone, Auklet, Tsunami. I personally don't really agree with cannon Characters having OC's as their  Kids(unless it's an Otp Ship like glorybringer or Cleril) but I won't count off for this.

Backstory_ SURPRISE!!! Queen Coral had an egg with Chameleon. The result was Waterfall. After she was born, Shark discovered that she was half rainwing and took her to the rainforest. Queen Coral did punish him but because she needed him to be her head guard, it wasn't as harsh as it could. In the rainforest, she didn't like to sleep at suntime and the other dragons didn't understand. Waterfall is a loyal follower of Queen Glory, but she doesn't have a problem with Queen Coral either. After the Nightwings, moved into the rainforest she met Moonwatcher (moon) and she was probably Waterfalls best friend. It was Moon who convinced her to go to Jade Mountain. 

Other_ she has a small pebble sized piece of Skyfire. (Which was given to her to shut her up, on the way to the rainforest.) Cool!


Good:

Overall well developed! Waterfall's name is also great because it can relate to both rainwings and seawings! I do have a quick  question though. Why didn't Coral just take Waterfall back to the sea kingdom?

Bad/how to fix it:

The only thing I think is wrong with Waterfall is That she  is too overpowered. Most Hybrids have one full trait or  a trait that is nonexistent or weak, Such as a Night/ice might have either a small firebreath or  no firebreath. You could give her a limited amount of time she can breathe underwater or   take away her Venom. THis is just a suggestion though.

Overall: 9/10

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