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Name:Wave

Hmm, kind of a bad name. Like, it's not very original. I've seen it a lot.

Gender:Female

Okay :3

Type of dragon:Sea/Rain/Sandwing

The only thing worse than a hybrid is a triple hybrid

Rank:Err, she's an experiment of the Skywings, to see how different breeds mix

That's kind of evil.

Where she lives:Originally, under one of the mountains, she currently lives in the forest with some of the other experiments

Okay.. not sure how I feel about this. Being an experiment is kind of.. cliche, I guess? It's not very original.

Appearance:Normal Seawing body, but she can be any normal Seawing colour, she has Rainwing fangs and a Sandwing barb, her wings seem normal, but a actually metal, made by an animus Skywing, she sometimes wears a rope necklace with a purple stone that her best friend gave her, it doesn't do anything, just looks cute.

Wow.. this is really overpowered. I don't think a RainWing hybrid would be able to change colors. She'd probably be stuck as one color (like Chameleon, for example) like a blue or green? The RainWing venom and SandWing barb are just too much. She doesn't need to be so overpowered. If you look at hybrids in the book, you'll see that they're usually pretty much the opposite. (Like Sunny.) And what's with the metal wings? Why did the animus give her metal wings? That's just weird.

Personality:Odd, quiet, extremely jumpy due to experiences when she was in captivity, can turn deadly when she feels threatened, but around her friends she's really sweet, despite her little quirks.

This is alright, I guess. It makes sense that she'd be jumpy. I've seen a lot of dragons with a similar personality, and while I think this one fits her it isn't very original.

Family:Foam (half sister, Rain/Seawing, dead), Oasis (mother, Rain/Sandwing, named after Queen Oasis, dead), Hammerhead (father, Seawing, dead), Eagle (mate, Sky/Sandwing, alive)

Pretty names. I have an OC named Foam too.

Backstory:She was born under the mountain with many other hybrids, but her, and five other hybrids, got sick of being treated with disrespect, and rebelled, this happened before the books started, and Scarlet planned to breed a super army for Burn, but it backfired, a rebellion, lead by Eagle and Wave, broke free, and ran off to the forest, constantly troubling the Skywing scouts and annoying Scarlet until Ruby took over, after that they left them alone.

Hmmm... okay. A super army doesn't make sense if it's made of hybrids, because hybrids are usually weaker than normal dragons..? This backstory is short and not very detailed. I'd like to know more..

Overall
I'll give Wave a 4/10. She's very overpowered, and nothing is very original or interesting about her. I'm sorry if I seem very rude, but I just don't really like this character, she seems a bit like a Mary Sue.