For @warriorrpmoonnose1 (sorry if this takes a while to upload, my internet is down because my power is out because of the windstorm so I can't update my freaking books)

Name/ Drown

A common name, but not overused. It's not very original.

Gender/ female

Ok

Tribe/ Seawing

Love them

Rank in tribe/ royal assassin

I've seen a lot of assassin OCs. Not sure why they're so common. Probably Deathbringer's fault.....

Residents/ she lives in one of room's in the queen's palace

Okay

Appearance/ Drown is a bulky,big boned dragon with a blend of dirty blue and green scales, some of her gills are ripped from messy kïlls same with her sharp claws. She has some accessories with her shark tooth earrings and a single piercing on her ear (on left by the shark tooth earring) of a pearl that was given by her parents for her hatching day, also her glow in dark scales almost completely on her face with little on her legs, and when her scales light up they give an Dark blue color.

I like this! I like that you described her body shape. Bulky and big-boned aren't very common descriptors, especially for female OCs. So, cool! The colors match well and I like her jewelry.

Personality/ Drown is interesting she has mood swings a lot from the stress from the queen she gets very,very,very angry at little things too. She stays up almost every night in result of paranoia and insomnia, when every she is happy (which happens when she gets to visit her family) she tries her best not to get angry at things or fall asleep when talking to them. Drown can get VERY light headed which causes her to be clumsy and ignorant of surroundings too.

Alright. She has very noticeable flaws, which I like. It's good that her occupation affects her a lot, I can imagine being an assassin would. She almost seems like she has TOO many bad traits. Characters should be a good mix of both good and bad, not purely one or the other. I like the bit about her trying to be good when she's happy. Add a little bit more like that.

Family/
Beach (mother)
Shore (father)
Lake (aunt)
Lobster (uncle)
Aquamarine (sister)
Clam (brother)
Whirlpool(brother)
Jellyfish (brother)

A big family!

Backstory/
1-5
Drown was born first making her the oldest of the group,so her parents (who where both assassins) decided to make their oldest Drangonet the one to carry the family tradition of having the oldest being an assassin. Drown had to get home schooled by her parents,her siblings where jealous that she got to stay at home while they had to go to Jade Mountain Academy.

6-19
During this age is when she was hired too kïll a Mudwing named hog (poor hog) by a male Seawing named Ink, so Drown did what told she got too the Mud Kingdom whit little effort because of the peace treaty and the Queen starfish and Queen tadpole she stalk the Mudwing she was scent to kïll and managed to take a good hit at eye when she got him cornered but he fought back by tearing at her gills which she retaliated by biting at his neck kïlling him.

19-67
Years passed from that and Queen starfish's assassin had passed so she scent out all the assassins in her kingdom to go kïll an SkyWing named flight who she had some beef with so Drown went out to find the Dragon unfortunately a Seawing was already attacking her, but Drown joined in the fight and took the kïlling bite so Queen Starfish decided that she'll have drown and the other Seawing be her assassins. Years of kïlling took its toll on her sanity but one unfortunate day for drown well lived up to her name, her Gills gave out and she drowned.

Okay. This isn't the best, it doesn't seem... great? I've just seen a ton of assassin OCs, so it's difficult to find one that stands out from the others. This one doesn't seem very.. special. It leaves me with some questions too. Who is the other SeaWing assassin? Why were her parents both assassins? I don't think the Kingdom of the Sea has a huge population of assassins.. idk, seems odd to me. I do like that her backstory is cut into parts depending on how old she is, that's nice.

Other: WELP hope you like her

She is alright :3

Overall
Okay, so! I'll give her 7/10. Her appearance is very nice, I like it. You did good there. Her personality could use a bit of work, she needs some good traits. Her backstory is alright but it isn't very original. I've seen too many assassin OCs before, she doesn't stand out. Find something original to add in that would make her more interesting, more original.