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Name: Deep

Not the most original name for a SeaWing, but it's alright.

Gender: Female (woopsie you have too many of those right?)

Surprisingly, there seem to be many more male Wings of Fire OCs than there are Warriors. I haven't seen too many females. There's an equal amount of both, imo

Tribe: Seawing

You know what there are too many of??? SeaWings

Rank: Royal Guard for princess Cherry Blossom of the RainWings. (shhh search the story)

Odd. Okay

Residence: The RainWing Castle

Since when did they have a castle

Appearance: She is unusually large and strong for her age. Dark, dark navy blue scales. Her belly, chest and the area under her tail are a dark, lavender-tinted grey-blue, paler then her scales. Her wings are only slightly paler than her body. Her darker scales, (neck, horns, et cetera) are nearly black. She was hatched in extraordinarily deep waters so her scales are so dark, and her light-up-scales shine about two times brighter then normal, meaning to speak Aquatic, she needs to keep them quite dim. In a stark contrast to her dark scales, she has pale purple eyes.

I really, really like this. Perfect. I have a similar looking oc (very dark blue) but I like that it's because she was born in very deep waters. The bit about her light-up scales is really interesting, I wouldn't have thought to add that. It is unique.

It also adds to her name, so, I like it. So far she's great.

Personality: She is a very firey, bold and sassy dragoness, but she loves her friends and family dearly. She is somewhat bossy and sarcastic, but friendly and fun often. She is wickedly hot-tempered, and if you make her mad.... Uh, run.

heLLO TSUNAMI

I really like this personality. Too many people make their oc the shy, quiet type, so this is nice. She's like a combination of Glory and Tsunami. The last part made me laugh, too.

Family:
Great aunt: Dolphin (Pale green-blue dragoness)

Grandmother: Shore (Sky blue dragoness, sand-colored belly)

Gran (grandmother): Cloud (pale blue dragoness)

Gramps (grandfather): Reed (Dark blue dragon)

Mother: Aqua (Aquamarine dragoness)

Father: Navy (Navy blue dragon, closely resembling Deep but a few shades lighter)

Brother: Coast (sky-blue male with a sand-colored belly)

Mate: Uninterested

Dragonets: Uninterested

Big family. Good names.

Backstory: 
Deep was a former attendee of Jade Mountain, in the Amethyst Winglet with a pair of NightWing twins, a strange, runty Sandwing, a Firescales Skywing, a mute Mudwing, an Icewing with the gift of Prophecy, and a RainWing princess. Well, guess they grouped the strangely-marked SeaWing correctly. Anyway, their peaceful time at the JMA was cut short by an assassin. They tracked him down and it turned out it be Dawnwatcher (the female NightWing twin)'s secret mate. She was actually carrying his eggs! "After a second assassin (A dragon named Darkness) tried to kill Dawnwatcher and her mate, was stopped by the school's owners (descendants of the first ones), the JMA was destroyed by a massive storm. Dawnwatcher had one dragonet, a son, Shade.
Deep and Cherry Blossom (the RainWing princess) had become good friends in that time, and after all the drama went down, Cherry invited Deep to be her lead Royal Guard. Deep, obviously, accepted, and now leads an elite team of all tribes of dragons to protect the RainWing Queen.

That's very interesting. I'm curious, why didn't Deep go back to the Kingdom of the Sea? What was it like there? I like stories set in the JMA, they're always quite interesting. What happened to Dawnwatcher? And.. Jade mountain academy, after it was destroyed? Is it being rebuilt or were they just like "welp I guess that's over now"

Idk this is good but it's kinda confusing

Overall
9/10 I really like her personality and appearance, but I found the backstory kinda confusing. It left me wondering what happened to several characters. I don't think she's bad, but..