Name:Skyspirit 

Skyspirit is a really cool name, it's unusual to see a clan name as a cat name. 

Name reason: She was named Sky after her big sister and Spirit for her brave and sensible heart 

That's a good use of the name! 

Age: 20 moons 

So pretty young.

 Gender:female 

 Sexuality: straight 

 Clan(s): ThunderClan 

 Timd Peoid/Era: The power of Three 

Huh this is suddenly popping up more and more...

 Rank: Warrior 

 Looks: white cat with light grey stripes and green eyes 

She sounds cool but it's super basic. What's her pelt like? Long? Short? Messy? Well groomed? What's her structure like? Lithe? Plump? Short legged and stocky or lean and long legged? 

Personality: smart, adventurous, friendly, brave 

Very lacklustre, you should of explained more and added how her traits are displayed. 

Abilities: is a good runner and hunter 

No other abilities beyond physical ones? 

Strengths: a very good at hunting, running 

Running doesn't sound like it would be a strength in thunderclan, where their prey required a stealth and there's too many trees and such in the way to run fast.... 

 Weakness: hard for her to swim 

 Family: Iceeyes(father, albino tom with silver eyes) Violetpool( mother, blue-grey cat with dark stripes) Eaglestorm(brother, grey tom) 

Iceeyes won't be albino if he has silver eyes, that being said I liked how you gave them appearances. While you later do explain her relationship with Eaglestorm I wish you explained her relationship with her parents and added why her and her brother didn't get along. Also you didn't include Eaglesky?

 Friends: Aspen, Rosefall, Blazestorm 

She isn't friends with any cannon cats? You did explain how they met but why are they her friends? Also reuse of 'storm'

 Crush/Mate: has a crush on Aspen 

 Kits: none 

Backstory: Her big sister Eaglesky died in the day when she was born and her parents decided to name their new kids Eaglekit and Skykit. Skykit and Eaglekit weren't so good brothers. They hate each other and when they grow up their relationship wasn't very good. After a fight with her brother, Skyspirit runned outside her clan's territory where she was attacked by rats. Aspen, a young loner, saved her from rats with his nieces Rose and Blaze. Aspen loved his nieces but he wanted them to be safe and he told Skyspirit to took them into her clan. Skyspirit fom that day felt something from him, for his kindness and every day when she feels aline she's going to speak with Aspen. 

I wish you explained more about her kithood (since from her age I would say she was just a little kit when they settled at the lake) and her apprenticeship, and I wish you would mix in the power of three events into it since that's the era she's from. 

 Other: none

————-5/10

Creativity and originality: 18/25 she's a pretty original character, but points were lost from using a clan name as a name. Points were also lost for not having a creative personality. However her being named after someone is cool and it's a creative name origin. 

Detail and effort: 10/25 the detail and effort was really lacking and you left out a lot, there was many things you could of added in nearly every description. You lost points for reusing storm and you lost points for not including any others. Her era is Power of Three but that seems to mean nothing to her story and seems to effect nothing about her, I could shove her in any other era and she'd be the same cat. 

Realism and effort: 20/25 she defiantly is a realistic character, spare the running strength, but I found it a bit hard to stay interested due to the lack of detail. Still a good story though just wish you added more.