Name: Riftcatcher

That's unique I like it! 

Name reason: She was unique and strange, so they gave her a name that fit her

Don't see how Riftcatcher would be strange but alright....

Age: 5

Gender: Female ((like meeeeeee))

Sexuality: straight ((Idek wut I am))

Tribe(s): Night, Silk

Cool combo! 

Time period/era: about 40 years after the sandwing war ended

Occupation: Nightwing spy, Gold Winglet

Spy? For who? Queen Glory? Why would she need a spy? Where'd she get the training and why'd she want to be a spy? Why bother joining the academy?

Looks: A Nightwing But with no wings, instead she has four buds in their place. She has cold-gray curved horns, red pupiless eyes((by that I mean she has a white oval in the middle of her iris where her pupil should be))purple spines, black scales with a cold-gray underbelly. A black Forked tounge, a pair of purple, short and small antenna on her eye ridges. She has a pair of tear-scales that are bigger than Faitspeaker's but smaller than Moonwatcher's. She is a tiny bit skinny and has an icewing-like stature. A golden-chain necklace with a pale-purple moonstone pendant on it.

BLACKANDREDOCNOOO *coughs* I mean why would she be anything like an IceWing? That makes no sense since she's a NightWing Silkwing and neither of them share a similar stature to an IceWing....otherwise she sounds cool! 

Personality: likes to argue, tears up easily when yelled at, can be sarcastic at times but can be very serious when needed. Rather quiet when she is with strangers and without her friends or family, likes to say weird thing sometimes and occasionally says a depressing or creepy thing or sentence but plays it of as a joke.Is more of a bystander than someone who intervenes But is rather supportive , nice, funny and will fight for her friends if she's forced. ((Basically me))

I like the detail to her personality, and how she's not the overused 'nice and friendly and nothing else'. but you didn't bother to mention her 'lack of innocence' from her backstory. 

Abilities: she has a variation of mind-reading , ((that's why she has tear-scales))that she calls "Sight-seeing", can feel vibrations but she only notices them if she thinks about them which is rare.

....care to explain what Sightseeing is and how it works? No..? Righty then.... no other abilities either besides the physical capabilities....

Strengths: she's a bit smarter than other Nightwing dragonets her age, she is also trustworthy

Why's she trustworthy and how does she show it? Are hybrids more trusted by now? 

Weaknesses: she can't fly, is practically blind ((can still see, but not the way she's used to)) if her necklace is stolen or lost, she sometimes has thoughts that contradict other thoughts and then she gets really confused and wears a blank expression, being a bystander. Very little fire.

A few good weaknesses, awesome! 

Family: Nightshade- Riftcatcher's mother. A Nightwing with hints of red, yellow and purple in her wings, cold-gray underbelly. Dark green eyes. Died protecting Riftcatcher and Cryptid.Somber- Riftcatcher' father. A Nightwing Animus with blue spines, blue star-scales, a blue-green underbelly. Red eyes.Cryptid- Riftcatcher's Older brother. Could read minds. A Nightwing with light-gray scales, white spines and a black underbelly. Electric Blue eyes. Died when Riftcatcher was 3.

Colourful family and good names, but I wish you'd include who they're descended from and who Somber inherited his animus powers from alongside Riftcatcher's relationship with them. Although the colourfulness makes sense since they aren't in the volcano anymore and thus have more colours to their scales. 

Friends:Naga: A female Rainwing who can only make her scales shades of green, blue or purple so she chose a dark blue-green with purple talons, spines, wing membranes and frills. Purple eyes.

Ember: A male Skywing with orange scales, light brown spines, claws, and wing membranes. Yellow eyes.

Prismarine: A female Seawing with light blue scales, green webbing/wing membranes. Pink eyes.

Cool but how'd they meet? Why are they friends? Same winglet? Is the friendship mutual? How's it effect her character?

Crush/mate: none UwU

Respectable since she's still a dragonet.

Dragonets: N O

Allllright any reason why?

Backstory: Her father, Somber cast a spell so that his second dragonet would be a nightwing hybrid, but it would be a random type. It could have been a Skywing, a Rainwing, a Seawing, It could have been a hybrid of anything. When her egg was due to hatch, it didn't. Nightshade, Somber and Crypid were all very worried. They didn't want to loose another dragonet. SHe hatched a day late, which must have been why her Mind-reading power wasn't as developed, causing her to have Sight-seeing instead. When she did hatch, she couldn't see anything but darkness. Cryptid found out she's was blind, so he made her a necklace. He told her to never loose it and put it on every morning when she work up. Riftcatcher did this for the next three years. Riftcatcher was with Nightshade and Cryptid to celebrate her 3rd hatching day at possibility, Somber couldn't be there since he *woke* he was very ill and for some reason, magic couldn't cure it. At Possibility, the trio was threatened by a Sandwing and a Seawing. They wanted her necklace and their gold, which they already didn't have a lot of. Nightshade said "No." And the sandwing hissed, and stabbed his barb at her, she dodged, but the Seawing whacked her with his tail in the neck. There was a crack and she fell over, limp. Cryptid howled with fury and lunged at them and grabbed the sandwing's neck. The sandwing, however, stabbed him in the chest. He died instantly. In that short time-frame of fighting, Riftcatcher ran all the way back to the cave. She was filled with anger and vowed that one day, she would take the pair's lives, just as they had taken her mother's and brother's. And when she was 5, she did, the dragons had completely forgotten about her, and when they saw her again the sandwing said "hey, are you alright?" How pathetic. They couldn't even remember her and what they did. They needed to pay. She stabbed the sandwing in the chest, to punish him for stabbing her brother the same way. And she snapped the neck of the seawing, to punish him for snapping her mother's. But before she got rid of the evidence, she clawed out their eyes.She threw the bodies into the river, and went back home, blood beginning to stain her scales. She cleaned herself, Somber was asleep. She let him sleep, she didn't want him to know what she had just done. She was no longer innocent, and she knew it.

Okay so first off, why would Somber want his dragonet to be a hybrid? Where'd they live/who's their queen?  It mentioned they didn't want to loose another dragonet, what's that mean? Did she have deceased siblings? If so why weren't they included in the family? If they lived close enough to Possibility for a three year old flightless dragonet to run back safely why aren't they living with the NightWing Queen (who because you didn't specify I'm gonna say is Glory) and if they didn't remember her how did she remember them? And how did she kill them if they'd be older and there'd be two of them/she has no fire and no other means of combat? They really managed to kill an adult dragoness and her brother but couldn't handle a single dragonet? And where's the part of her being a NightWing spy and part of the Gold Winglet? Her friends? Anything previously mentioned??? 

————- 5/10

Creativity and originality: 20/25 Riftcatcher is defiantly creative and original along with her family, I have seen the names of her friends a few times however. I wish you added in more of how being half Silkwimg effects her though.

Detail and effort: 12.5/25 you forgot a lot of detail and didn't bother to explain some things like her 'mind reading' power, where she lived and why her father wanted her to be a hybrid in the first place. You also left out her occupations and her friends, and many other relationships. The effort was there though! 

Realism and interest: 13/25 I was pretty interested the entire time but a few things were unrealistic, mostly how she killed the unnamed SandWing and Seawing that killed her mother and brother despite being much younger, on her own and with no mentioned fighting capabilities or weapons at all, in reality she might of gotten one of them off guard but the other should of nailed her moments after.