Name: Pelican

Good Seawing name. I like it.

Age: 8 years old

Just a wee babe.

Tribe: Seawing

One of the most used OC tribes. Oh well, Seawings are heckin' sick.

Gender: female

Yup.

Sexuality: bisexual

Okie doke. Lots of room for crushes when you're into guys and girls, and I low key love shipping characters. LGBTQ+ being represented by a smol Seawing bab.

Personality: she is a bit grumpy at times and gets jealous easily, she is kind and loves to help dragons

Grumpy and jealous. Me too, sis. I like the positive and negative.

Appearance: light blue dragon with pearls around her horns and shamrock green eyes

Pretty basic Seawing appearance. Makes sense.

Powers: everything an average seawing can do

Yay! Not overpowered!

Likes: fashion, her parents, jade mountain, Paradise

Oooooooh. Who is Paradise, hmmmmmm??? These make sense.

Dislikes: mudwings, peanuts (allergic)

Nooo! Not the Mudwings. They're my babies. I feel backstory coming though. (A few more would be good too)

Fears: mudwings (killed her brother), her mind being read (uncomfortable), Having someone better than her

That's the mudwing part. These make sense.

Backstory: she was born to King Pike and Queen Anemone. When she was just three years old, mudwings attacked on the seawings and killed her brother, Prince Beluga and left a scar on her belly. The family was devasted until Anemone had another daughter, Shore. They became bffs until Pelican went to jade mountain. She met Aurora and Scorch, who had just received a prophecy. She traveled to the RainWing kingdom where she met Paradise, a nightwing and RainWing hybrid she fell in love with him and decided to stay in the rainforest with him. Queen Anemone was upset and begged her to come back to the palace. She said she would only go to the palace if Paradise could come. She accepted that Paradise could come and they moved into the palace. They had a dragonet, flounder, he was 2/4 seawing 1/4 nightwing and 1/4 RainWing. Aurora and Scorch ended up defeating Darkstalker when he took over his Peacemaker form. She now lives in the palace with her husband and daughter.

Eek. I don't like canon character's children to be OCs. The story makes sense. I feel like the details are there, minus the prophecy. What was it about??? Is Paradise supposed to be Deathbringer and Glory's son? Flounder is a cute name, but I just generally don't like hybrids. And why Darkstalker? He was reincarnated as a little cutie. Let him be! Just polish up your details. Other than that, pretty good.

"Family: King Pike (father), Queen Anemone (mother), Prince Beluga (older brother), Princess Shore (little sister), Prince Paradise (mate), Princess flounder (dragonet)

Makes sense. I low key ship PelicanxParadise.

Important dragons: Scorch, Aurora, Darkstalker

Pourquoi?                                                  ^

Overall score 6.5/10

I liked the character quite a lot, I just didn't like the canon characters and prophecy/Darkstalker thing. It didn't make sense to me. Other than that, well done.