Name: Mossflight.

Ooh. I like that one. I really just like the prefix 'Moss' in general.

Age: 58 moons. At Death.

Big sad.

Clan: StreamClan. They live in a forest with few trees and lots of undergrowth. There is a pond where they go fishing and they live close by to the ocean. They are known to be compassionate and fierce. They live beside another clan called MarbleClan and soon MapleClan and ForestClan join them.

Oh, that's cool. I like it!

Rank: Warrior.

Yuppers.

Gender: She-cat.

Another female OC. It's all peachy though.

Personality: She is kind, caring and calm, but she is not naive and is a great fighter. She constantly worries for her families safety and can get pretty snappy if you anger her to much. Other than that, she is very motherly, you'll often find her carring for her fellow clanmates and she adores kits.

Aww, what a big sweetie! I like that you have positive and negative traits.

Appearance: Grey and white she-cat, like a grey tuxedo with blue eyes and thick fur. She's medium sized with small paws and a fluffy face.

Cute.

Abilities: Making cats feel loved. Fishing.

Ooh, fishing! I guess that makes sense considering she is StreamClan.

Likes: Kits. Caring for others. Taking walks. Spending time with her family.

She's really big on family, huh?

Dislikes: Thunderstorms, cats judging her kits, which only ever happens with other kits. Dawn Patrols.

Solid.

Fears: Something bad happening to her family. Water, because while she was pregnant with her kits, she almost drowned. Letting cats down. To name a few.

Oof, don't drown!

Backstory: Mosskit was born to Bayfur in StreamClan with her sister Creekkit. She and Creekkit were close but Creekkit never seemed to want to play any games or listen to the elders stories, always finding them boring or something. Mosskit was annoyed with her sisters desire to do nothing.

"Desire to do nothing." Me too, sis.

Luckily though, there other kits in the nursery that Mosskit would play with and was close with. The kits she played with most were Amberkit, Cloudkit, and Rowankit. Mosskit and Rowankit became best friends quickly.

My brain: Is Rowankit a boy? Are they gonna be mates??????

At 6 moons old, Mosspaw was apprenticed to Sedgeclaw, and Creekpaw to Glowpelt, Sedgeclaw's mate, so Mosspaw and Creekpaw always got to train together. Not long after they were apprenticed, Mosspaw noticed Creekpaw leaving camp alone and missing important events such as there three older siblings, Dapplenose, Fallenfeather, and Rubynight's

I don't think cats know what a ruby is??

warrior ceremony. One day Mosspaw was out hunting when she saw her sister having a friendly chat with a kittypet. She confronted her sister who in return, told her that she didn't believe in StarClan and she never liked being a clan cat.

*gasp*

Mosspaw was in shock at the descovery and even more shocked when Creekpaw left StreamClan to become a kittypet, perusing the name Muffin.

Twoleg: Your name is Muffin.
Creekpaw: What the frick-frack is a muffin?

Mosspaw soon was able to except this and continued to train with flying colors, but she still took the time to visit her sister in twoleg place. She and Rowanpaw became much closer during this time and Mosspaw couldn't understand why she felt so important and happy around him.

It's called love, darling.

Soon Mosspaw became a warrior with the name Mossflight. Rowancloud, Amberheart, and Cloudfur became warriors along side her. As a warrior, Mossflight's crush on Rowancloud grew and grew, and with encouragement from Amberheart and Icewind, she told him how she felt in which he confessed that he felt the same way. Many things happend as a warrior but soon when she was four, Mossflight found out that she was expecting Rowancloud's kits.

'Many things' indeed 😏

They were both overjoyed and awaited the kits arrival with antisapation. Mossflight had one incedent where she took a walk outside camp and fell into the Trout Pond, almost drowning with her kits inside her, but Rowancloud rescued her just in time.

That explains the fear of water a little better. Don't be clumsy, Mossflight!

She soon after, gave birth to three kits, Dovekit, Creekkit, and Brightkit and proceeded to give her kits the love and attention they needed. Soon though, they became apprentices, allowing Mossflight to return to her warrior duties.

*single tear* They grow up so fast.

One day when her kits were about 7 moons old, a few foxes attacked and Mossflight fought them bravely along side her clan. Unfortunately, A bite to the throat was her final blow. She died that day and woke up in StarClan, finally getting to meet her father and being reunited with her apprentice and long lost clanmates.

I may have missed something but I didn't realise her apprentice was dead? Maybe I'm blind. Oh well. RIP Mossflight and co.

Overall Score: 9.7/10

There was nearly nothing wrong with this. Aside from the ruby and dead apprentice and father thing, this OC is awesome! It was entertaining to read, too. Like a mini fanfic.