Tried a different style, really hoping to find one I like.

Backstory:
Goldenstrike was born with her sister, Morningdew, and from when they were kits, it was clear that Goldenstrike was the favorite. Morningdew grew up hating Goldenstrike for it, and Goldenstrike had no idea why Morningdew hated her. But as Goldenstrike became an apprentice, her parents put a ton of pressure on her without realizing. She started to think that she had to be on top of her sister. This caused her to push Morningdew down as much as she could, making up rumors, bullying her, and more.
When they became warriors, Goldenstrike immediately wanted to be deputy, which would make her better than her sister, and get the attention of her parents.

Im not going to put anything else on here because I might end up making it a fanfic. There is a lot more though!