Gasp! Edited Version?
Okay, so, I don't know when I'll actually get to the next chapter of this, and I'm sure many of you are disappointed. However, I thought that I could at least share my plans for the edited version of this story. Obviously, it doesn't spoil too much but will give you a general idea of what might be different. Also, as I already have the first few chapters edited, I will begin to publish the chapters once twenty people say they want it to be published. So, I'll be looking at those comments!
These are my notes. Aren't they wonderful?
-Bakugo popping unpopped popcorn kernels
-Awkward silence
-Burn ze traitors
-no more speech (sports festival arc)
-panic (at the Disco), needs teenage angst
-CHARACTER AND RELATIONSHIP DEVELOPMENT
-Include Mic cause he's great
-Shigaraki be a disappearing disappointment
-Visit to the Todoroki household
-Oh look, it's burning trash
-more detail (don't be lazy cause we all know you are)
-Bakusquad vs Dekusquad
-Don't pull straight from the anime, DEVIATE FROM YOUR NORMAL WAYS MORTAL
-Counselor sessions
-Fujiyama introduced earlier
-Kage be bada**
-Auntie Muri to the rescue!
-Don't cast Michiko aside, integrate her into the plot, integrate her into your life
-Oh, would you look at that, Masami actually talks to people
-Why so much dialogue? Be gone thought (Yes, I know how I spelled it)
-Should I change Sports Festival? Pony Tsunotori, maybe Jiro or somebody from Class A
-Being dead seems magnificent
-Kiyoko is neighbor
-Awkward encounter with Todoroki and Iida before school(EVERYTHING IS ALWAYS AWKWARD WITH MASAMI)
-Make the readers fall in love with Masami's quirky self even more
-Hitoshi, the spotlight is on you!
-Training scenes
-Big Three, more like Big Four
-show signs of insomnia and troubles with nightmares
-FRIENDS, YAY
-Holy shizzlepops, is that a spider?
-Aliases, who?
-Music comes from the soul
-Movie (it was beautiful)
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