A/N: I am going to be reacting to this story as I go, and my reactions are going to be in bold font. I'm going to be entering the story as the original so there may be spelling/grammar mistakes. I haven't read most of these in years and this is going to be my first time rereading them, so this will be fun lol

Once upon a time, there was a kindhearted, VERY smart girl named Pippa Lou. She lived in a small town in the state of Mississippi, with many cheerful people. Exept (except) for one uncheerful person: Jeca Mctary.

Disclaimer: A lot of the names I came up with in past stories are extremely weird. Prime example: Jeca freakin' Mctary.

Jeca was rude, a big teaser, selfish, foolish, and most of all, JEALOUS OF OTHERS (in all caps).

Well, at least she has... flaws???

All of the adults thought that Jeca was a little angel, but she wasn't. Jeca was a brat. (oof). One peticular

*insert British accent* peticular

One peticular  Tuesday, Pippa Lou was finishing her math homework when the wind began to swirl swiftly around Pippa Lou's house. The tree branches hit the ground with a thunk. The earth began to shake with a loud, rumbling noise. Pippa Lou anxiously looked around the shaking house, wondering what in the world was going on.

Outside, a huge tornado swirled around Pippa Lou's house, and with a tint of hurricane and earthquake to complete it.

define "a tint"

Pippa Lou sprinted to the basement as fast as she possibly could. Pippa Lou's heart was beating a mile a minute, and her eyes were as big as saucers. She could even hear the next door lady, Ms. Treeline, screaming as loud as a middle schooler when they find a pimple on their face. (ah, the classic overused pimple simile.) Then Pippa Lou knew what was going on. She heard a shrill laugh coming from the icy mountains. (Mountains?? I thought this was Mississippi) Yes, this was Jeca Mctary. All Pippa Lou needed to do was to STOP Jeca, but how?

All of a sudden, the weird storm stopped. The tree branches hooked back onto the trees. It sounded like: Dwee Doolap!

*wheezes* DWEE-DOOLAP

The leaves stopped swirling instantly and fell quietly to the ground.

Okay, so I just noticed this, but I say the word "swirl" an excessive amount of times in this story.

"Pippa Lou, are you okay?" said a scared and shaky voice.

You thought Jeca Mctary was bad. But get ready for:

"Kocalina!" Pippa Lou said in great shock. "Is that you?" There was no-not at all- not one reply. 3 minutes later, a girl with honey-blonde hair, raspberry glasses, and bright blue *ahem* ORBS appeared at the bottom step.

"I've got a problem on my hands," Kocalina said. "I've just spied Warpston stealin' my sister Karla's arrowhead collection, and you know Karla, when she loses somethin' she throws a big bad fit."

Hate to break it to you, sis, but we have more problems than an arrowhead collection right now.

Also, does anyone have parents around here?

"I think we have bigger problems," Pippa Lou murmured under her breath. YES PIPPA LOU SPITTING FACTS

Suddenly Kocalina started screaming. "YVETTE! Oh, my sweet Yvette! I left her in her bunny cage during the hurricane, or was it an earthquake? Well, who cares. I can't believe I did that!" This conversation was going haywire.

"Don't worry, we'll find Yvette," Pippa Lou said. 5 minutes late, Pippa Lou and Kocalina were at Kocalina's house. Both girls stopped in their tracks. Warpston was chasing Ms. Treeline! (I thought she was Pippa Lou's neighbor) "HELP!" screamed Ms. Treeline. "Get this bird crow thing away from me!"

"You find Yvette, I'll help Ms. Treeline. GO!" shouted Pippa Lou so Kocalina could hear her over the neighbor's lawnmower.

Wait, why was a lawnmower on?

Pippa Lou turned her head to see Warpston, who was still chasing Ms. Treeline, but now he was try to run her over with a lawnmower!

...............

I literally died laughing for like 5 minutes after reading that. My family asked me if I was okay.

I am so, so sorry.

Pippa Lou ran over to Warpston and stuck her tongue out at him. Warpston turned his head and began to chase Pippa Lou. This was it- no turning back. What now? Pippa Lou thought.

Warning: I myself have no idea what is happening in the next paragraph.

5 minutes later, Pippa Lou was at the mountains. She didn't stop because Warpston wasn't far behind. 2 minutes later, Pippa Lou reached the top of the mountain. (someone please enter this girl in the Olympics) She gave an iron grip at the top of the mountain, staring at Jeca kissing a mushroom.

Pippa Lou clutched her magic pencil tightly and threw it at Jeca. Pink smoke was everywhere. "Yeah!" said a voice. "Jeca's gone!" Standing there were Kocalina and Yvette, smiling. And they all lived happily ever after. The end.

........

Okay... *sighs*.

I have many questions about that last paragraph there. I think it's pretty self-explanatory why.

Overall, this story was pretty bad. But I actually had a lot of fun reacting to this and got a good kick out of it, and I hope you guys did too! Comment down below if I should continue this series, I want to hear what you guys think!

In the meantime, I'm going to continue doing reactions and I will update every Monday and Thursday from here on out.

-Mel