What should have been done

This is what should've been done in chapter 31 of Khairul_Hafiz2's FanFiction "Gacha Game Crossover: OC's Arc". But UnknowingFire wouldn't let me. This is based on a video by The Lazy Eyebrow and based on one of Stewie and Brian's time traveling adventures.

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Patrick was on a random computer. There were hate comments about him all said by Luis.

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He was feeling down because of what Luis said.

He can't get the hateful things, Luis said about him in the comments.

And some of the things he said in chapter 31. Including what his ship girls said.

(Music stops)

Patrick: ... *sighs*.

Theresa: Everything alright, Patrick?

Patrick: I don't know Theresa. It's like everywhere I look, it feels like Luis still hates me for something I didn't do. Like what he said in the comments about still hating me and everyone else. I wasn't the one who banned him but he still hates me because he was jealous that I had a normal life, thought I also agreed with banning him, and that I was the one who landed the killing blow on him. I was trying to do my best not to get jealous of him being more overpowered than me and despite months after Chapter 31 was worked on and published, and after saying that he still hates everyone which includes me in the comments, it feels like I'm still being punished.

Theresa: Oh... I'm sorry to hear that.

Patrick: I didn't even want to write the fight to the death but Luis' author insisted that I write down the fight because he found the other options to be boring and hates the easy ways out. And preferred the hard way out by force. If I had not written you down banning Luis, it would have been a much happier chapter without the ordeal. That's my biggest regret in Khairul's FanFiction. It feels like every time you or any of the Valkyries does something wrong to Luis, he keeps blaming me for the wrong doings when I had nothing to do with the wrong doings but keeps blaming me for the wrongdoings no matter who was responsible.

Theresa: He did hate you more than us.

Patrick: I'm actually glad that the FanFiction is over. Because since chapter 16, all the chapters have had nothing to do with the band girls and UnknowingFire kept having Luis hating me for what I didn't do. But now that it's over, I won't have to deal with Luis' problems or Azi-Dahaka anymore. However, it didn't make me feel any better at all. I can still hear those words Luis and his ship girls said about us. About how bad we were. After the ordeal in chapter 31, we've had no interaction with his ship girls. Other than Sakura having interaction with Prinz Eugen but she was not there in chapter 31. We've heard no forgiveness from them, even though they have no memory of the ordeal anymore. They don't trust anyone because of all the things that's happened to Luis.

Tears began to come out of his eyes.

Patrick: I can still hear the words they said about us. How disgraceful, disgusting, and despicable we were with locking Luis up in a vault while doing the draft then changing it to banning Luis from training and missions. Because of that... I won't be able to look at "Azur Lane" the same again.

He paused for a few seconds before continuing.

Patrick: So now... You and I... We're gonna do what we should have done in the first place after Luis started hating us. What UnknowingFire should have let us do. Go back in time and undo our mistakes and stop ourselves from doing those things to Luis. UnknowingFire refused to let us do it because he said bad things would happen if we went back in time and there were no time machines to use. Now here in my profile we have no restrictions from him. We're gonna do it anywhere.

Theresa: Very well... I guess we can. If that's what you really need to do to find your closure. I'll go with you. Which time machine are we gonna use?

Patrick: Doctor Who's TARDIS. The one used by the 9th and 10th Doctors.

Theresa: What's the plan?

Patrick: First we prevent you from inviting Luis to St. Freya, then we prevent you from banning Luis, and then we prevent Bal from giving Luis the card early and tell him to give it to him after introducing himself to everyone and warning everyone of what will happen to Luis.

Theresa: Alright. Let's do this.

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They go into Theresa's office where the TARDIS randomly appears then they enter it then set the coordinates on where to go first then the TARDIS disappears and goes through time.

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(Dreamscape)

The TARDIS appeared in a dreamscape where Bal was then Patrick and Theresa instantly came out.

Theresa: STOP! Don't do it yet!

Bal: Who are you, Bal?

Patrick: We came from the future to prevent you from doing something that will cause consequences.

Bal: What did I do, Bal?

Theresa: Nothing yet. But whatever you do. You cannot give Luis the card yet. If you do, It will cause him to scream in pain which then leads me to ban him from training and missions because of how his powers were unable to be controlled which will lead him to hate everyone and go rogue on them.

Patrick: He will hate me the most because of how he doesn't trust boys and will think I agreed to restricting him. It will also cause his ship girls to hate us too for the same reason. He's going to hate us for all eternity.

Theresa: Also, don't have him leave yet. There is plenty of time before Azi-Dahaka shows up. Introduce yourself to everyone first then give Luis the card. But make sure he's not in pain or the me in this timeline will ban him anyway.

Patrick: And don't have him leave to protect everyone yet without telling them first.

Bal: Alright. Alright. Alright. I promise to introduce myself to everyone first then give him the card after warning them what will happen once I give it to him, Bal. And we'll wait till Azi-Dahaka shows up then we leave to go fight him after telling them, Bal.

Theresa: Thank you.

Patrick: Let's go.

They get back in the time machine then go to before Luis woke everyone up and appeared in Theresa's bedroom which woke her up.

Past Theresa: What is going on?! I was enjoying a good sleep!

Patrick: STOP RIGHT THERE!

Patrick and Theresa came out of the time machine.

Past Theresa: What the?! Who are you?!

Theresa: I am you from the future.

Patrick: And I am Patrick, also from the future.

Past Theresa: What are you doing here?

Theresa: We came here to stop you.

Past Theresa: What did I do?

Theresa: Nothing yet. But whatever you do. You cannot ban Luis from training or missions. If you do, he's gonna turn rogue on you and hate everyone for all eternity just for banning him. He's gonna be in pain from receiving more power from Bal, the Sun Dragon from "Future Card Buddyfight". We all thought that he couldn't control his powers, and because of that, I banned him from training and missions which caused Luis and his ship girls to hate us. His ship girls did not leave because they couldn't fight against the Honkai, they left because they were angry with us for what I did to Luis.

Patrick: And he blamed me for it instead of you.

Theresa: He was able to prove that he can control his powers but refused to forgive us after killing an unnamed overpowered villain. You better not ban him or else he'll hate you for all eternity.

Patrick: And he's going to blame me for it instead of you. I had nothing to do with it but he blamed me for banning him anyway.

Past Theresa: Alright. Alright. I promise I won't ban him.

Theresa: Also, if you don't do something nice for his ship girls, they won't trust you.

Past Theresa: Don't worry, I'll do something nice for them.

Patrick: Let's go.

Patrick and Theresa get back in the TARDIS then it disappears.

Patrick: There is one last thing that needs to be done.

Theresa: I know.

The TARDIS appears in Theresa's office months before the ordeal and a few days before the band girls and crossover characters visited Azur Lane. In the office were past versions of Patrick and Theresa. Patrick and Theresa instantly came out of the TARDIS.

Theresa: Stop right there!

Past Theresa: Who are you?!

Theresa: We're you from the future.

Patrick: We came here to stop you.

Past Patrick: Who screwed up?

Patrick: It was Theresa.

Past Theresa: What did I do?

Theresa: Nothing yet. But, whatever you do. You cannot invite Luis over to St. Freya. If you do, he's going to hate you and Patrick for all eternity through all of his reincarnations.

Patrick: That's right. He's going to hate you the most for all eternity. Even if you had nothing to do with the wrongdoings the Valkyries did to him, he's still going to hate you and blame you for the wrongdoings.

First they explain everything that's happened then they show them what happened which caused their past selves to have negative emotions then they erase their memories of what they saw.

Theresa: Now you understand why you can't invite him.

Patrick: He's happier being in Azur Lane instead of here. Inviting him will cause him to hate you, my past self. He doesn't trust anyone besides his ship girls.

Theresa: And Bismarck will never let us apologize or forgive us. He won't need to train in St. Freya because Bal helped him to control his powers instantly and made him stronger and already has enough power to beat Azi-Dahaka.

Patrick: Let Luis be himself and let him be overpowered than us. And don't ever call him unacceptable or he will hate you more. Also, let Wolf be himself too.

Theresa: Also, if you don't prove to Bismarck, Enterprise, Belfast, and Amagi that you can be trusted, they will hate you anyway.

Patrick: I just hope our actions may have saved you from months of unnecessary hatred, unnecessary sorrow, unnecessary sadness, unnecessary fights, and unnecessary hardships. You already understand. Let's go, Theresa.

Theresa: Ok.

(Present)

They returned back to their timeline and reappeared in Theresa's office.

Patrick: It is done.

Theresa: What should have been done in the first place.

Patrick: UnknowingFire should've let us go back in time. But no, he restricted us and wouldn't let us and forced us to fight against Luis when we didn't want to. Because killing him wouldn't solve anything. It was a bad story, not a good story.

Theresa: I'm gonna go read my HOMU Manga.

Patrick: I guess I'll go to my dorm room.

Patrick leaves Theresa's office and goes back to the Valkyries' dorm where he goes into his dorm room and drops down to the bed.

Patrick: *sighs*. Well... at least I won't be blamed for it anymore. And at least the mes' of those timelines won't be blamed for it or go through what I went through.

Theresa goes into her room too and also drops to the bed.

Theresa: *sighs*. Well... at least Luis' shipgirls in the past won't blame my past selves for doing something wrong to Luis. They just don't trust anybody, that's their problem. Somebody else is gonna have to deal with their problems.

Patrick and Theresa appear in a split screen.

Patrick and Theresa: We never want to deal with their problems anymore.

(The End)

Author's Note: UnknowingFire , I'm sorry but, I must speak my mind to you. This is what should've happened after Luis and his shipgirls began hating my OC and the Valkyries. I never wanted to write down the fight but you forced me to. Chapter 31 should've been about a friendly visit to St. Freya without fighting. But no, you found that to be boring. I wish I never wrote down Theresa banning Luis and he would have still been friends with them. That's my biggest mistake and regret. Making that chapter made me uncomfortable and disturbed me. Luis should have forgiven them after killing the villain because that's what was supposed to happen after proving to them that he can control his powers. But no, you wouldn't go with that and had him hate everyone instead of forgiving them. I question why you wouldn't have him forgive them after killing the villain. Including my OC. You should have let them go with the options to undo their mistakes. But no, you found those options to be boring. I wish I never made that chapter with you. It should have been about a friendly visit to St. Freya. Not Luis hating everyone for doing one bad thing to him. Now I won't be able to forgive myself for writing down Theresa banning Luis. That made my OC and the Valkyries look bad. It feels like his shipgirls still hate my OC and the Valkyries. I wish I never did chapter 31 with you. I'm sorry but... I needed to speak my mind to you. To ge it off my chest.

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