You're welcome to ignore this but please try to read the important bits and give your opinions

So this book is honestly one I hate
I feel like it's not slow pace enough and very rushed

I don't like how the plot is laid out and I'm considering unpublishing the smut chapter or treating it as not apart of the storyline

Slow burn is something that used to be hard to read because a lot of the fanfics I had read was very fast ripping off the bandaid, getting married and then focusing on their marriage

I want to pace it slower and edit all the chapters, changing the story but keeping the original

What do y'all think?-

It's more of an insecurity I have and I'm afraid that now this is sorta popular that people will begin to notice the fast pace and shitty writing

I started this a year ago now and would like to think my writing and creative headspace has matured

Update, this book is being edited and semi re written! It will be continued in THIS BOOK, just re written, I have all the chapters up to the one titled Truth already edited and Truth has been entirely changed, please go read those as they are updated! The plot is re starting from Truth so nothing from the newly written chapter has happened

Welcome to the beginning of the slowburn and actually well written
'what's a soulmate!'

Update no. 2, It's done! I finally edited and re wrote all the chapters!
For my older readers, The smut chapter didn't happen and todoroki hasn't made them an official couple yet
It's more like two good friends or two people just trying out something small and experimenting for now

Enjoy the angsty slow burn!