1|☆First place in BTS Fanfic Award 2021☆

TOTAL MARKS ( 98/100 )

1. COVER ( 5/5 )

I just love the cover, he/she did a great job with it. It does match with the plot and it's fancy as well. I liked it.

2. TITLE ( 4/5 )

The title of the story is not probably the best title but he/she has done a great job with the title. The title gives me the feeling of dictatorship and vampires that's a good thing.

Marks reduction issue:- Well the story is still not complete so I can't judge the other contents so easily. ' WHAMMY ' means a powerful event with some unpleasant effects or an evil or unlucky influence; influencer. I didn't find some of that many events which will convey the meaning to the Title. But I can be wrong since it's still not completed yet.

3. DESCRIPTION ( 5/5 )

He/She wrote a quite satisfying description. It will attract more and more readers. The description was enough to attract audience who love thriller and romance in the same plot.

4. OPENING ( 10/10 )

The opening was great! I loved it. It seems rare to see these kind of openings in a wattpad story. After a long time, I got an opportunity to read a story like this. It gave me a drama like feeling and when readers get that feeling they will support you till the end of the story and even after that, unless there are some irksome situations in the story.

5. PLOT ( 10 /10 )

I liked the plot since the beginning. It was well written. Well the Jeonovia thingy made me remember Princess Diaries where the main actress id the Princess and soon to be Queen of Genovia.

6.GRAMMER ( 15 /15 )

Grammer is something which enhances the plot of the story. Good grammer is always important to write good stories. I really like your grammer skills.

7. INCIDENTS ( 10 / 10 )

Well the incidents are quite good but since I don't read much fantasy genre books so probably for me they are kinda little dramatic but it's great. I took some advice from a fantasy genre lover-writer and she said it was well written.

8. DIALOGUES ( 10 /10 )

The dialogues are quite good... Its so well written that I can feel the emotions in the scene. ( I normally have some difficulties in doing that )

9. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT ( 9 /10)

The character development was good till now. I don't know what's going to happen afterwards so yeah.

Marks reduction issue- Well firstly, I don't know what's going to happen in the end since it's ongoing, so I can't give full marks right now.

10. STRUCTURE/WRITING STYLES ( 10 /10 )

I really like the way He/she writes. The style is really good and it helps the readers to understand what the character is trying to say properly. It is also helpful in reading the emotions of the character.

11. RULES FOLLOWED ( 10 /10 )

Yes

DID YOU ENJOY READING? - I did of course

ANY SPECIAL POINT TO AUTHOR :- Well, I really like your story. I'm a regular reader of your story. I know I shouldn't be a silent reader but nowadays it's been quite hectic so I'm just reading and taking points. Cover, plot, description, opening, writing style and grammer are the main points which attract readers the most. You have it all . your doing great all ready so keep going on...

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2| ☆First place in the Crystal Snow Awards 2021☆

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3| ☆First Place in Silent Voice || BTS Award☆

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Whammy by Iamasuperstar30

Cover - 4/5

Blurb - 5/5

Grammar/Vocab/Pacing - 20/20

Plot - 9/10

Book title - 5/5

Emotions - 10/10

Ending - 4/5

Enjoyment - 9/10

Total : 67/70

Reviews : I feel like the book is perfect. Perfect in terms of how the author has described even a tab bit detail about the protagonist. The way you've made the readers come to acknowledge about Taehyung's personality was incredible. Though at some point I felt like the birth/entry of the female protagonist i.e Viri could have been a bit more precise when it was changed from Taehyung's point of view. There wasn't any mention that the view point has been changed so some readers might get perplexed as to why Taehyung would suddenly feel like running away. Later it was made clear but it was a thing I could say needs to be taken care of to increase the coloration of this book and one more thing from my personal view is that you can use the pictures in either the starting or at the end of the chapter otherwise the book is really well and deserves all the love because of the hard work that the author has jotted down.