So this story wasn't what I originally thought it would be like at all.

For starters, the characters were, for the most part, really different from each other. I wasn't expecting so many!

Plus, a couple weeks ago, I was rereading some of my first chapters and the grammar was terrible! And for half of it, it didn't really make sense....

So thank you, all you wonderful people, for sticking through this book, even if it made no sense! I promise, the next book will make much more sense.

Alright, now I ask for some criticism:

- Was 40 chapters a decent length to tell a story?

-Did I make the characters the way you wanted them portrayed? (Yay for vocabulary!)

-Did you like the characters that I made up? (Sekia, Ren, Eclipse, Chaos, I think that's it)

-Should I put a limit on how many characters I'm accepting for the next book?

-Hm... I'm not sure what else to add, just tell me your thoughts on this book, it'll really help me out! And please be honest, I won't be offended if you don't like it.

Just saying, I planned to finish this book in early July. Now it's November 22....

But thank you to:

LightningClawedSky

Shinyshinx

vollov

PokemonRio

aakash034

for your amazing Pokemon character gijinka people, I hope you enjoyed the book! And if you didn't, hopefully you'll like the second book better.

Bye bye!