Author: demigodwithacoffee
Genre: Paranormal
Parts: 3
Reviews from SircasticNoble

Cover:
 ⚫I have this weird thing in me (I am normally weird though), and I call it the First Glance Syndrome. This is when I find good stuff at first glance; but when I look at it again, I realize it's not really good, or it's a so-so. This happened to me with the cover. It was good when I first looked at it. However, upon staring at it for quite some time, I concluded that the image is just what's fine for me. The cover itself has a low quality, the color combination of the cover versus the title is dark over dark which is too much to handle. Moreover, because of it, the title is a bit unreadable. You can use a glow or a drop shadow for the title to pop out, or something. The tagline's font color is black too and it is unclear. I had to wear my glasses (graded -1), and drew the phone closer to my face at about five inches for me to be able to read the, "Let them think I'm insane." Bottom line: edit the cover.

Title:
  ⚫I like it. No questions asked.
 
Blurb:

 ⚫It's good, but not good enough. The elements are there though; the materials are too. I guess it's how it was arranged; or how it was formulated. Sometimes ideas overflow in our brain to the point that we get lost. We get too ecstatic that the result becomes half baked instead of being on point. The author should not redo it from scratch, rather arrange it chronologically, add some, and take out others.

Grammar/Punctuation/Writing Skills:
⚫Grammar is definitely good. Punctuations: yes. Writing skills: Superb.

Plot:
⚫Can I just say that out of what I've reviewed so far (from this lounge), this is by far the most satisfactory experience. It did not waste my time, it did not stress me the least, it did not make my brows crease too...and that's an achievement, for sure.
⚫The story still has three chapters, yet possibilities—plot-wise started dancing and screaming inside my if not brilliant, then above ordinary brain (of course, I'm kidding. I do know how to kid sometimes. Tsk.). Anyway, it's really good.

Breath/Tone/Narration:
⚫The characters are alive. Narration is fine. Tone is spot on. What more can I say?

Character Buildup:
⚫Can't say regarding this one since the story is too premature yet.

Good points:
⚫Narrations are neat. Very minor technicality (can be overlooked, but not to me).

Bad points:
⚫I really can't say. This is the disadvantage of reading only three chapters. I guess it's just the ones I've pointed out in the inline comments.

Is it worth reading?
Yes.

Scale: 8

Overall feels/suggestions:

⚫Some sentences opened with either a conjunction or a preposition, of which is erroneous in constructing a sentence (and, but, or, etc.). Just be mindful of that. That's it. You are ready.

Always being me,
SircasticNoble