COMMENTING PERIOD: July 21 - July 27, 2017, 11:59 P.M. Central Time

MODERATOR: SapphireAlena (Direct any questions or concerns to WayfarersLamppost)

COMMENT TOPIC OVER EACH CHAPTER: First chapters are extremely important. They need to set the tone and entice the reader to read the rest of the book. Comment on the level of your engagement throughout the chapter. Did you find yourself skimming at times? Or were you hooked the entire way through? How was the author able to keep you engaged and/or how did the author lose you? Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.

META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments):

^ 👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter—[MANDATORY])

^ ☕ or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter—[MANDATORY])

^ 💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

^ 😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

^ ❤ or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

^ 😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

GENERAL COMMENTS:

Keep your tone friendly. You will be with your partner for many weeks. Give the type of feedback you want to receive on your own book.

Comment on characterization if it was well-done. Did a plot twist get you? Did something pull you out of the story? Most of all, if you're enjoying it, say so and say why. Refrain from giving editing advice, including grammar, phrasing, and story elements.

Have a problem with the comments on your book? Contact the enforcer.

ASSIGNMENTS [alphabetized by username]:

Member - Partner - Partner's Book - Chapters

Enforcer: SapphireAlena

AmericanBruja     Echo4Echo     The Witches Bottle   Prologue, 1 & 2

Arveliot                   FanyPi              Canton Chronicles: Rising Power      Prologue, Memories of Peace and War (1) & Dreams Connected - Valentine (2)

Echo4Echo            AmericanBruja    Day of the Dead      Prologue, 1.0 & 1.1

FanyPi      Arveliot      The Dragon Chase     Prelude, 1 & 2

FayLane     TheGreyLeo     Blood Ties (Book 1)     Prologue, The night of burning roses (1) & The city of sin (2)

henry_scott     painebook     Paine - Time of Anarchy     1-6 (The chapters are grouped in pairs in Wattpad—1 & 2, 3 & 4, 5& 6)

JimInfantino     mackeywriting     The Doppelganger Scenario      Prologue, Prologue Part 2 & Prologue Part 3

mackeywriting      JimInfantino      The Wakeful Wanderer's Guide to New New England & Beyond     1 & 2 (4000+ words)

MichaelHoliday      ZonderZorg     Unknown Diners     1, 2 & 3

painebook     henry_scott     Revenge     Prologue, 1 & 2

Enforcer:  AmericanBruja

SapphireAlena     Shellyxleonn     The Ghost and the Wolf: Book I of The Broken Series     1, 2 & 3

Shellyxleonn     SapphireAlena     Star Wars: The New Jedi Order      Prologue & 1 

TheGreyLeo     FayLane     The Myriad Chronicles: The Reader     1, 2 & 3

ZonderZorg     MichaelHoliday     Chasing Immortality     The Order 1.1, The Order 1.2 & The Order 1.3

ChuckDonahue     GarrettMock     Flux     1, 2 & 3

GarrettMock     ChuckDonahue     The Long Walk to Dawn      Daniel I (1), Greg I (2), Joshua I (3)  

REMINDERS:

When you have seen your assignment, comment on this page that you have done so.

When you finish your assignment, create a new comment on this page that you have done so.

Enforcers will be checking all comments for quality and tone.

Questions? PM WayfarersLamppost.