Snowdrop
OC by @Degal_Heartfang
Name: Snowdrop
Colsies
Gender: male (lot's of boys I know)
It's fine. I only have one female main OC so I won't complain
Tribe: IceWing
Cool
Age: 7
So adult, cool
Sexuality: Homosexual Biromantic
Noice
Residence: Ice Kingdom (4th circle)
Not to high but not to low, perfect
Occupation: Ice Skater
I haven't seen this before, and it makes sense. Well done!
Queen They Support: Queen Snowstorm of the IceWings
Cool
Family:
Mother - Opal - very pale blue dragoness with white unders and wing membranes, has lovely blue eyes.
Father: Wolf - silvery white dragon with paler colored unders, has slightly darker blue eyes.
Ooh they sound very pretty!
Friends:
Mist (You know him) YEP.
Frost - silvery white dragon (co-worker)
Coldfront - SandWing/IceWing hybrid, has the body structure of a Sandwing, but spikes, coloring, and face shape of a IceWing, has yellowish silver scales; Trans male.
Ooh Coldfront sounds really well developed! I'd love to review him. :)
Zenith - very dark dark grey NightWing with a purple tint to him, has dark blue eyes. (Co-worker)
Cool
Abilities: Normal IceWing things, nothing very special for powers and stuff. Has better traction on ice though then most.
Makes sense
Appearance: A very lean graceful looking IceWing with smaller talon built for ice skating. Has white scales with a little mix of silver and sweet dark blue eyes. Wears a small red scarf with his team's symbol (the IceWing Skating Team symbol is a snowflake)
I find it hilarious that IceWings have ice sating teams yet it makes perfect sense I love it! :) I might have to make my own IceWing skating team XD
Personality: Snowdrop is very polite and tries not to hurt others, thanks to this he's mostly stepped on and kicked around because if his forgiving nature. He is known to be smart, but tries to act dumb to other tribes, so no one is curious on stealing him.
Awwwww...
Strengths: He is a good friend to talk to if somethin' wrong, and trying to help his teammates is a well known trait in him. Frostbreath, claws, tail, normal things
Can he be my best friend?
Weaknesses: He's to nice for his own good, and to forgiving. He is bad at lying too.
Ahhh, I see this a lot. Many people will say this is a Mary-sue. I don't get that feel from him, but the wording makes me cautious. That said, I haven't read his backstory yet. I'll give you more info once I have.
Okay, so I've read the backstory now and this is okay.
Likes: snow, rain, skating, his team, his mother and father, a lot of things, actually
XD Makes sense
Dislikes: Meanies, hailstones, lighting/thunder, loud noises in general, fire, death, his claustrophobia
Okee
Backstory: He was hatched just like very normal IceWings and was placed in the Dragonet circle like everyone else. His parents were in the fifth circle, and worked as hard as they could to raise their son to the best of their ability. When he was around one or so, he meet a dragonet just a year older then him, named Frost, who grew to be his best friend. The two would play together and since Frost's family was in the sixth circle, his parents didn't really care on the younger dragonet stay for sleepovers. When he became five, Frost lead him to a large frozen lake, where his father caught him how to fish for seals and other things. Snowdrop tried many times to catch a few with Frost, but would always let the animal go if he could without Frost noticing, seeing as he actually hated killing things. Frost didn't mind that much, but made sure Snowdrop told him before he let one go, so they could come up with a way to lie about why they couldn't catch as many. Thanks to Snowdrop though, and his terrible lying, they were mostly caught.
Once day, when Snowdrop was heading with his parents to the Sand Kingdom to the Scorpion's den. There he met Coldfront, one of the many sellers in the S.D. they talked for a bit, and he came to visit every few days, till the became friends. Once day, Coldfront came with him back to the Ice Kingdom, and to the lake where Frost took him to. The two were trying to see who could stand on the ice the longest without really using their claws. The two did this frequently, but always got their clawtips clipped so the other wasn't say they were cheating. Frost found out about this and was became confused, why would Snowdrop be doing this when he had better things to do? Finally, Frost asked him what he was doing, and way he standing in the ice with his claws clipped. Snowdrop explained it was a thing they just did, which made Frost a little ticked off by this, seeing as Frost is sort of a yandere for Snowdrop.
Okay this made me laugh XD
He wasn't crazy enough to kill, no not by any means, but it just made him upset to see him with someone else. Jealousy you could call it. Frost went onto the ice to talk to him privately, but Snowdrop got nervous that Frost was going to hit him, and tried to get away. He had his wings sure, but thanks to all the flying back and forth from the Scorpion's den and back, it would leave them sore and tired. He tried to run away, but thanks to the ice, he began to slide seeing his clawtips were clipped. He began to slid everywhere with Frost after him, and Coldfront watching with wide eyes seeing the way Snowdrop could move across the ice, kind of like a dancer. Once Frost caught him, Coldfront could help but cheer for him. The two were confused, and asked him way he was cheering. Coldfront then explained that a long time ago, IceWings would go an art called Ice skating, where diffrent teams of dragons would glide across the ice with their wings closed and their claws clipped, and preform for others and for special events like a royals' hatching day. Snowdrop started to skate everyday after that, trying diffrent ways to make other smile and cheer. Only Coldfront, Frost, and his parents knew about this, until he meet Mist. Mist had come to find Prince Ghost, his father, and found Snowdrop skating one day. The hybrid was shocked by the way the IceWing could move and complimented him after he was done. Snowdrop was embarrassed and begged Mist not to tell the Queen just yet, and that he wanted to prefect his skills until telling someone else. Mist agreed and in exchange he want to know how to get to his father.
Snowdrop told him how to get to the prince as his end of the deal, and Mist left him. Mist didn't kill the Prince, and just wanted to ask him questions on why he left him, and family related things, if you were wondering. Snowdrop found Mist heading out, and asked to speak with him, in which the Advisor (Trickle's Royal Advisor), agreed. Snowdrop asked him the Second Chance Cavern and Trickle, and that maybe he could come visit one day. Mist thought it was a lovely idea, and agreed to the visits and let him know what Trickle thought. Trickle agreed to it, and Snowdrop and Frost both went to look at the giant cavern.
There, he met Zenith, and the two became friends almost immediately. Meeting Bubble, Trickle's animus sister, she saw how much the two enjoyed each other, and made Zenith a special ring, one that could hide his NightWing look and made him look like a fellow IceWing to IceWings (except Snowdrop and Frost), let him go over the Great Ice Shelf, and survive the cold. It took a bit of her soul, and maybe ten percent, but said it was worth it. The three headed back, and Frost told them that Zenith was left outside the kingdom as an egg, seeing that Snowdrop couldn't lie that well. Snowdrop showed them how to skate, and they slowly became experts at it. Snowdrop finally decided it was time to tell the Queen, in which Queen Snowstorm was delighted by. She said she hadn't seen a show since she was small small dragonet, and would love to see another show. Snowdrop, Frost, Coldfront, and Zenith preformed a show for her, with music from the musicians, and she was delighted. She made Snowdrop and the other's the first Ice skating team in over seventy years, (her daughter didn't really want the throne, so she didn't bother challenging her, she didn't really like all the responsibility), and soon other tribes liked the old IceWing tradition, and few of the others (Especially Trickle's group) made these special braces you put on their feet to skate easier (ice skates). Snowdrop and his team was the best team the IceWings had, but still have tough competitions sometimes with the other tribes. He still skates at the lake on most days, with Frost and Coldfront by his side.
I love this. I want Snowdrop as my best friend. XD
Other: Snowdrop will be mentioned and be a character in 'We, the Freaks: Mist's Judgment', hope you like him!
MENTIONED!? He's such a well developed character, he should get his own book! XD
Also, I ship FrostDrop(SnowdropXFrost) You're welcome. XD
God, I love this OC. I wanna give him 10/10 because I saw nothing wrong! He's not perfect, bland, too exciting, or an anti-sue of any sort! Such a perfect innocent boi.
So! 10/10 it is! Well done!
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