BoneWings
Fantribe by @Dengal_HeartFang
Tribe Name: BoneWings (cliché, but stay with me)
Okay
Tribe Abilities: This tribe is able to breath intense fire, sometimes become blue in color. The tip of their tail has a special tail guard that is dipped in RainWing or SandWing venom, to protect them if needed. Some are able to hide well in the dark, while some can't. They have very kin sense of sight, but they are sensitive to light. Theses dragons cannot, and I repeat, CANNOT go into sunlight, do to a curse put on them by a FeatherWing animus king named Bluejay. If they do, they burst into flames, and become ashes.
Why were they cursed? They have cool abilities though.
Queen: Queen Gravestone - dark grey 12 year dragoness that received the throne early do to her mother sacrificing herself for her. Has petrified green eyes and a very battle worn helmet that was once her mother's.
Why did her mother sacrifice herself for her? What was the cause? Also, that helmet thing is sweet.
JMA: None, lives with the FeatherWings in Sharadom (SHARE-A-DUM)
Cool name
Appearance: Theses dragon's scales are mostly dull colors, but are usually black to a dull grey-red. Very rarely blue. At the moment of hatching, they are given a dragon skull, to hide their looks, which they call 'The Gift of Concealment.' and famous saying among the tribe is 'Show your face, you're a disgrace', will explain more later. They have powerful bone crushing talons, and, as before, very delicate scales that are cursed.
These sound cool. And dragon skulls are creepy, but makes sense given their name.
Habitat: The BoneWings once lived on the mainland, in the upper most part of Sharadom, where there were vast canyons and holes leading everywhere. Every since they were cursed, they were forced underground, hiding from the light of day, trying to rebuild a new kingdom on an large isle called 'Bone Isle'. They were able to dig vast tunnels while most of the tribe stay until it was ready. It took years upon years to dig it all out, but it has become one of Sharadom's most beautiful kingdom, to those who have visited. Gemstones litter the walls of the palace, located in the large room.
Ooohhh Sounds pretty.
Other: This tribe is also called DeathWings or ReaperWings, depending on the tribe (Ex. FeatherWings called them ReaperWings). They're ancestors weren't the nicest, nor the friendliest, the main reason they were ran out by the others.
Okayyyyyy... Can you elaborate?
Other (again): They were able to get the RainWings and SandWing's venom back before they got their sunlight delicate scales, when they would travel to Pyrria. (Not sure if I spelt that right...)
How long ago were they cursed? Would the venom/poison last that long? And it's spelled Phyrriha I think.
I give these guys a 6/10.
Why?
—Lack of explanation in multiple areas
Yeah... Thats it. These are well thought out I just don't know all the details, so they seem, um...
I don't wanna say bland but thats kind-of what I mean? I'll re-do them if you'd like to re-submit.
Anyway, thats it! Just missing explanation in a few spots. Bai!
~Tewofuru
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