So sorry!!! I thought had finished and published this one :/ 

Name: Snowleap 

Physical description: Snowleap is an albino cat, meaning he has snowy white fur and gleaming red eyes. He has a long scar rippling down his back, like his friend, Fernblaze.( my first OC) Cool! I don't think I've ever  seen an albino Warriors OC!

Age: 38 moons 

Gender: male/ tom 

Family: Whitefeather(mother, albino she-cat) Stormcry( dark grey tom with yellow eyes) Ashwillow( brother, paler grey tom with almost amber eyes) Needlewhisper( sister, white she-cat with light grey patches and lively grey eyes that she got from her grandmother, Silvergaze)

Rank: warrior 

Clan: Shadowclan 

Personality: manipulative, sarcastic, witty, feisty, soft around his mate, slightly mysterious

Backstory: Snowleap was born into Shadowclan, with his two siblings, Ashwillow and Needlewhisper. When they were apprentices, Thunderclan attacked their camp, and they fought fiercely. He saw Ashwillow(Ashpaw at the time) fighting a Thunderclan apprentice, but she seemed to have lost the will to fight and couldn't fight back.He and his best friend, Cherrypaw, rushed over and told Ashpaw that he had won, but Ashpaw disagreed and instead, fought Snowpaw. He slashed a deep scar on his back, just like he had done to the Thunderclan apprentice.He staggered over to the apprentice alongside Cherrypaw." You okay? I'm Snowpaw, Ashpaw's littermate, but I'm nothing like him." He said." I'm Fernpaw," the apprentice replied weakly." And I'm Cherrypaw!" Cherrypaw exclaimed.After the fight, all the apprentices got warrior names. Snowpaw became Snowleap, Cherrypaw became Cherrydapple, Ashpaw became Ashwillow and Needlepaw became Needlewhisper.After the battle, Cherrydapple and Snowleap got closer and closer, until Snowleap asked her to be his mate. She agreed.Ashwillow hated him for getting a mate and kits, while he got nothing. One day, they were hunting, just after the medicine cat had a prophecy.("Love is stronger than blood is true.") When suddenly, Ashwillow attacked him. Snowleap, shocked by this, killed him, and raced back to camp.He raced to the medicine den, and poured what had happened out to him. The medicine cat, Owlwhisker, said that that was what the prophecy meant, and that there was nothing else he could have done. Snowleap went into the nursery, to tell Cherrydapple what he had done. He was surprised to see two kits lying beside her, mewling helplessly." Do you like them?" Cherrydapple asked." They're perfect!" Snowleap breathed. "I want you to name them," she said." The albino one will be Whitekit, after my mother, and the ginger and white one will be Applekit." Snowleap said." Beautiful," Cherrydapple murmured "Where's Ashwillow?" She asked." He came out hunting with you, and I didn't see him return." Snowleap sighed, before telling her what happened." I'm sorry," he hung his head low in shame. Cherrydapple shook her head." I was with Owlwhisker when he had his prophecy, you were meant to kill him," she murmured, licking his fur. To this day, their kits are apprentices and they are senior warriors now.

Mate: Cherrydapple( pretty ginger she-cat with darker ginger splotches, a black muzzle with a white dot on her chin and bright green eyes. 

Kits: Whitekit( albino tom with long fur, future name: Whitespark) Applekit( pale ginger she-cat with white splotches and mint green eyes) Extra: His best friends are Fernblaze, Hollyspark( a Thunderclan tom) and Feathershine( a Windclan she-cat)

Good:

Good backstory! I like how you didn't just make your OC albino, he was albino from a trait passed down by his mother, and he had an albino kit fro! This trait too! I also like seeing he's a Tom! I don't usually see a whole lot of Toms! The backstory is also good!

Bad/how you can improve:

The personality needs a little bit of work. You should balance out his good and bad traits a little  more. I was also a little confused with part of the backstory. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think prophecies work in that way. If you want Snowleap to be a prophecy cat, make the prophecy bigger than him just having to kill his brother.

Overall: 7/10