Name: Toxic- (I was really skeptical about this, but now that I've read it, I understand...)

Clan: The Inferno

Gender: Tom- (Kay.)

Age: 48 moons during the main storyline, 85 moons at death

Appearance: a calico! For a tom, those are rare. He has amber-ish, yellow-ish eyes. A more detailed description is that there are orange, brown, and black splotches all over him, with an almost entirely black back left leg. He has longer legs and tail than most other cats, and he has a bad habit of flattening his ears, even if he's not angry or upset. He tends to let himself get very dirty before he's instructed to clean himself by his mate. He's kind of skinny, too.- (This is really cool. You're right, calico toms are rare, and they normally cannot reproduce. Good job.)

Personality: He's a coward at heart. There's that saying; "Fight or flight." Toxic is flight, 100%. Luckily, his clanmates know this, and try not to put him in any situations where he might have to make a life or death choice because he'd just shut down. He's fiercely loyal to his clanmates, especially his mate and sister. He's generally a nice cat and can make friends with others, and is especially good with kits (although he can't have any of his own.) He's very sarcastic but knows to not step over the line and be mean to other cats. He's the type of cat that will only talk to you if you strike up a conversation first. He's also very paranoid, and sometimes he wakes up in the middle of the night just to circle the camp a couple of times to make sure that everyone's safe. He's constantly worrying that something's out to get him. Luckily, his mate tends to figure out when his paranoia gets really bad, and she can help soothe him to make sure he doesn't get too frazzled.- (I love how you made him cowardly, but the paranoid part is a little overused. I can see why he would worry about his Clanmates, though.)- 1 point

Rank: Patroller (surveys the territory of The Inferno to find new cats to join the group, see if their boundaries have changed, and search for danger. They go both on their own and in small groups, depending on what their task is.)

Backstory: Toxic was originally born Pinekit next to his sister Rosekit in Riverclan. He had a good early life; his mother was kind to them, his father was a respectable warrior. Life was good. They were both apprenticed, with Pinepaw to the deputy, Shadeclaw, which was pretty nifty. All was great until late in their apprenticehood, when Pinepaw, Rosepaw, Shadeclaw, and Rosepaw's mentor, Embermist, went on a patrol to follow a fox mother to her den so they could try to chase her out and keep her from raiding the clan. They went far out of the territory, but weren't worried because it was only a couple of day's journey back. Then, they had to cross a lot of Thunderpaths, as they were nearing a large twoleg place. When they got to the third Thunderpath, Shadeclaw went last, and was hit by a car and severely injured. Embermist, Rosepaw, and Pinepaw had to watch him die a painful death over the next two days. After this, they wanted to get back across the Thunderpath and give up on their mission, but when they took a rest stop near one of the paths some twolegs took Embermist away in their monster, never to be seen again. Pinepaw and Rosepaw were on their own. They tried to find help, tried to find their way back home, but before they could finally cross the last Thunderpath, a twoleg pulled up in their monster and took them too. (This twoleg worked at the pound.) They arrived at the pound and stayed there for about ten moons. All this time, Pinepaw was trying to start a rebellion among the cats around him against the twolegs holding them captive. They were going to try to fight their way out... Before the night they could do it, however, a fire started. The building was old, and made of wood and stone, and caught easily. The twolegs abandoned the animals, but luckily the cats escaped completely unharmed.The cats had to stay overnight in the smoky ruins of the pound, and when they woke up the next morning, they decided to travel together as a group to stay safer in this gigantic twoleg place (city). They called themselves The Inferno, after the flames that had finally freed them from their prisons. The Inferno travelled for weeks, searching for a home. At one point in their journey, Pinepaw was sleeping in a twoleg barrel, to shield himself from the rain, when a cat approached him, asking if the words on the outside was his name. Toxic. He said no, but the cat, named Pastel, decided to call him that anyway. She told him that she wanted to join their group because she could read Twoleg and felt that it was helpful. Pinepaw, who now decided to call himself Toxic (he didn't feel close enough to Riverclan anymore) agreed with her and let her join. The cats eventually settled down in a back alley that nobody used. They had some problems with rogues and rats and whatnot, but other than that, they were happy. Toxic and Rose (she took the 'paw' off her name for the same reason as Toxic) taught the group of cats what they could remember about the clans and their traditions and whatnot, and tried to make their own clan. The Inferno.- (This storyline is awesome. I like how Toxic's mentor was killed by a monster instead of being murdered. I think it's really interesting how you used Twolegs as a main bad guy here, because it's not something everyone thinks of.)

Relatives:

Rose (sister, fluffy white she-cat with blue eyes)

Featherleaf (mother, tortie she-cat with amber eyes)- (Can't complain.)

Grayshade (father, gray tom with yellow eyes)

Spottedpool (my main OC, calico she-cat with green eyes)- (Yeah, still can't complain.)

Mate:

Pastel, a gray she cat with black stripes and feet with green eyes. Can read twoleg writing!- (That's a really cool ability to have.)

Death:

Dies by finally being brave and saving his mate from a monster.

Other:

He was asked to be leader of the Inferno, but thought it to be too hard and said no.- (I like how he's not the leader of everything.)

He originally didn't want a mate, but kind of just fell in love with Pastel anyway.

He has a younger sister from a different litter that still lives in Riverclan as the medicine cat Spottedpool.- (Cool.)

Points Taken: 1 point

Results: 99%

   I was really skeptically at first, but after I realized how much effort you put into this, I was really impressed. That's really all I have to say, so...