Name: Shadekit- ('Shade' isn't really an overused prefix...but I need a suffix for when he becomes a warrior. Any suggestions?)

Clan: LoveClan- (*LoveClan is not mine*)

Gender: Tom

Rank: Kit- (There's not much interesting about kits...)

Appearance: He is a jet-black tom with dark, cold, green eyes.- (Black isn't too bad, although black cats with green eyes are pretty simple.)- 1 point

Mate: None- (Okay.)

Kits: None- (Good.)

Crush: None- (He's a lonely soul...)

Mother: Blackstar- (*Blackstar is not mine*)

Father: Spikeheart- (I'm never satisfied with his name. I change it on almost every roleplay I apply to.)- 2 points

Sisters: Fawnkit, Owlkit- (Okay.)

Brother: Snowkit- (*Snowkit isn't mine*)

Backstory: Shadekit always felt rather pushed aside when he was younger, because his parents held high positions in the Clan. These feelings of loneliness increase when he becomes an apprentice, and he finds that he does not have a special power. He begins to despise other cats for this, especially his father, because he feels that his father passed this genetic trait down to him. He remains loyal to his Clan, but deep down he always stays a sad, lonely soul.- (I never realized how cliche this is...)- 3 points

Other: None- (Okay.)

Points Taken: 6

Results: 94%

   Well, I guess that's it. It's really hard to see problems in your own work; which is one reason why I wanted to rate OC's! I hope this wasn't too boring, and I hope this is an encouragement to those who have a new OC. I also want to thank @WolfsWail for requesting that I rate Shadekit.