User: @LunaTheMagicCat

Name: Kitty- (Hmm...lazy or cute? I like it. It's kind of adorable.)

Clan: none (My first kittypet!) +1 point!

Gender: She-cat- (Lots of she-cat OCs out there...)

Age: 23 moons

Appearance: black with white paws a white tiped tail and a bit of white under her neck, white eyes/ blind-(Black-and-white cats are becoming majorly overused. Many good OCs fall prey to black-and-white pelts. I know this may sound even more cliche, but most housecats are tabbys. I like that she's blind.)- 1 point

Rank: Kittypet 

Relatives:

Applesky (brother)- (Nice name.)

Mate: none

Kits: none

Backstory: she was born in a nice twoleg home, she never left the little basket that she was put in, her mother tried to get her to play with her brother but she never wanted to. When they were 4 moons old her mother was taken away and her brother was going to be taken away too, her brother ran away before he was taken, he joined a clan, kitty stayed with her twoleg, she never wanted to leave. Now she is a full grown cat, her brother visits her every now and then, he also teaches her how to hunt and fight, kitty refuses to leave her twoleg, her twoleg is her only hope in being able to survive- (Seems like the normal kittypet life. I like that she has a Clan-bound brother. Not too shabby.)

 Points Taken: None

Results: 100%

I like this kittypet. She's pretty normal, maybe a little average (don't hate me) but like I said in the last review, there's nothing wrong with that. I like that you added the fact that she's blind, and that her brother's a warrior. Good job.

As far as personality goes, she may seem a little boring to some, but she's a kittypet, therefore she's not subject to hunting, battles, and other the other aspects of Clan life. She seems pretty negative when it comes to change, which could count as a flaw. She's also obviously dependent. Make sure you work on giving her some good traits, otherwise, she's fine.