User: @colored_rainbows

Name: Fallingsnow (I'm not fond of the suffix Falling-, mainly because I see it used a lot. But I do see good intentions with this name.)

Clan: Shadowclan

Gender: She-cat

Appearance: Black she cat with spots down her sides, a white chest and underbelly, and white feet, yellow eyes. (You wouldn't believe how often I see this. However, I'm glad that you made her realistic.)- 1 point (Mainly because I see black and white cats all the time.)

Personality: Cold, shuts others out, snappy, hot-headed, kind if you get to know her, caring for family and friends. (When you relate her personality to the story, she really doesn't seem as bad as you say she is. This type of personality is very overused, and is somewhat unbalanced.) - 1 point (Give her more positive, outgoing traits!)

Backstory: Fallingkit was born to Ravenface and Snowtail. She had two siblings, Darkkit and Cloudkit. During her time in the nursery, she forged a very close bond with her siblings. She was apprenticed to Hazefire at six moons of age. Hazefire was experienced, and pushed her hard. Fallingpaw was a great hunter, yet never really liked fighting. During her apprenticeship, she became great friends with another apprentice named Yewpaw. Yewpaw became a warrior three moons before her, named Yewclaw, along with his brother, Rainears. A few moons later, her siblings and her became warriors, named Fallingsnow, Darkoak, and Cloudfoot. Later, Fallingsnow became mates with Yewclaw. Fallingsnow figured out that she was carrying Yewclaw's kits. She planned to tell him the next day, when they went hunting. The next day, when Yewclaw and Fallingsnow were hunting, Fallingsnow broke the news. Her and Yewclaw were delighted. Then, suddenly, a fox jumped out of the bushes. Wanting to protect her, Yewclaw jumped forward and started attacking the fox. Unfortunatley, the fox grabbed Yewclaw by the throat and shook him side to side, killing him. The fox grabbed his dead body and ran away. Fallingsnow was devastated. She then lay in the forest, grieving for her dead mate, until a patrol consisting of Rainears, Cloudfoot, and Antheart passed by. They found her, and Rainears was devastated. The patrol took Fallingsnow and Rainears back to camp and grieved with them. Shadowclan had lost a great warrior. Fallingsnow and Rainears started hanging out more, sort of healing each other's pain. Fallingsnow gave birth to Yewclaw's kits two moons later. She named them Yewkit and Thrushkit. They became apprentices six moons later, and were apprenticed to Cowtail and Blossomflame. Fallingsnow became even closer with Rainears, and became his mate. She found out she was expecting kits at 42 moons of age. She was overjoyed. Her kits were born a half moon early, and two of them, Dandelionkit and Patchkit, died of weakness. Willowkit was her only kit to survive. During her time in the nursery, she was able to witness her oldest kits become warriors. They were named Yewshine and Thrushlight. She was very proud. Willowpaw was apprenticed to Lizardtuft at six moons of age. (I really like your  backstory, although I'd guessed that Yewclaw was going to die...)

Father: Snowtail- black tom with a white belly, chest, paws, and tail, yellow eyes.

Sister: Cloudfoot- black she-cat with white specks, and white paws, tail, ears, muzzle, belly and chest, blue eyes.

Brother: Darkoak- black tom with white patches, and white feet, blue eyes.

Mates:
(Formerly) Yewclaw- yellow tom with black patches, green eyes.

(Currently) Rainears- black towns with yellow specks and light grey ears, feet, tail, and muzzle, silver eyes.

Daughters:

Thrushlight- Black she cat with yellow spots, and white feet, green eyes.

Willowpaw- Light grey she-cat with black and yellow spots, and white ears, silver eyes.

Sons:

Yewshine- Yellow tom with black spots, and a white muzzle, yellow eyes.

Dandelionkit- Black tom with yellow specks, silver eyes.

Patchkit- White tom with black and light grey patches, yellow eyes.

Other- Has a small knick in her ear from a border fight with Thunderclan.

Points taken: 2

Results: 98%

Overall, you're character is really interesting and I love the backstory you gave her. The personality you gave didn't seem to match with her actions and reactions, but I can tell that you love this character and are ready to use her in a Warriors story. Your plot line was basic, but I like how you didn't overcomplicate this character with overblown prophecies and murder. Great job!