Hiya! I will be doing an oc rater for warriors. I will rate an overall grade (A, A plus, etc.) Also, I got his idea from Inkwell13, please check out her.

Form:

Name: 

Gender: 

Age:

Clan: (Can be your oc clan)

Sexuality: 

Rank:

Appearance: 

Personality:

Family: (add appearance please)

Backstory:

Mate:

Kits:

Mentor:

Apprentice(s):

Friends:

Other:

Example of ratings:

Name: Flarefoot

Nice.

Gender: Tom

Age: 40 moons

Clan: Shadowclan

Sexuality: Gay

Good so far

Rank: Warrior

Appearance: A ginger tom with white and darker ginger spots. He has blue eyes and is fairly short. He has many scars.

Ok, good.

Personality: He is an outgoing tom, with a snappy attitude. He is impatient, but kind.

Ok, good that he's not a Gary sue.

Family: Mother: Iceflower ( A silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes)

Father: Firestep ( A ginger tom with a white underbelly and paws green eyes)

Sister: Sagerunner ( A silver tabby shecat with green eyes)

How did he get his spots?

Backstory: As a kit, Flarefootwas always getting into trouble, and one day, he fell into a fox burrow, and was attacked by a fox cub. He was scarred, and his ashamed of them. When he became an apprentice, he trained hard, resulting in a early warrior's ceremony. Once he became a warrior, he fell in love with a tom in his clan, and was confused why everyone else wasnt the same as him. He soon asked the tom, Applebird, to be his mate. Applebird accepted, and they now are loving elders. Flarefoot dies of old age soon after.

Ok, well I feel if he was attacked by a fox as a kit, he'd die, but maybe there's a reason? A nice, peaceful story though, well done for not making any crazy drama.

Mate: Applebird

Describe!

Kits: None

Makes sense.

Mentor: Tinypuddle ( A brown tabby she cat)

Apprentice: Stagpaw (A white tom with amber eyes)

Friends: Littlewhisker ( A brown spotted tom)

Well done! I'm going to rate this a B, just because his backstory was a little off, and that is fur pattern was off, but it could have come from other kin.