For warrior_cat_studios
Name-Amberfur
Okay.
Gender-she-cat
Age- I'm not really sure I use this oc a lot in her different ages soooo yeahhh
Fair enough.
Clan- thunder clan
Okay.
Sexuality-straight
Rank- deputy
Nice
Appearance- a pure ginger cat with bright green eyes
Okay. Buuuut from what I've heard, cat's can't be completely ginger. Also, because of Firestar, a lot of oc's look Ike this.
Family- mother- silentLightning white with blue eyes
Nice name.
Father- sandyBrook pale ginger with blue eyes
Okay.
Sister-lionKit/paw/lionsoul pale ginger tabby with green eyes
Brother-rockkit/rockpaw/rockpelt grey with greenish eyes
Kit- rainlilly (She-cat? Tom? Appearance?!)

Backstory- she always loved being a clan cat. Her best freind was SnowStorm. There lives were pretty normal until she became a warrior. She was mentoring her fist apprentice when ShadowClan snuck up and killed her for that she held a grudge against ShadowClan. (Ok) A friendly rouge who oddly had a warrior name (BirdClaw) helped her. (OKie) SnowStorm was having kits but refused to say who the father was. Later Amberfur was having birdClaws kits. (Okay. I like how this forbidden love isn't two clan cats.... well..) Somewhere in between that SnowStorm became deputy. (Her kits are apprentices now I assume?) She talked the leader into letting BirdClaw into the clan. (Hmmuh..) Amberfur got a second apprentice and ShadowClan killed him too. (I would make it another clan, but this still works..) AmberFur was furious but her sweet energetic kit ( who is now an apprentice) helped her be happy. (The cute lil' bab) There was a ShadowClan invasion. They almost killed rainpaw( her kit) but BirdClaw stepped in and saved her. He sadly died. (Dun dun dun... but was h in the clan yet? And did Rainpaw know he was her father?) Amberfur vows to get revenge.... no matter what it takes. Uhhuh

Apprentices- Lillypaw, tigerpaw , maple leaf

Okay! This is good. The only things I would change would be her appearance, and just minor detail changes in the backstory! A- Good job!