💧Rainpelt💧
Name: Rainpelt
Gender: Non-binary (they-them)
Sexuality: Questioning (probably bi)
Past and Future names: Rainkit, Rainpaw
Name meaning: They were named after the thunderstorm they were born in, which they lost a littermate to, and their grey fur reminded their mother of soft rainclouds. they are average at both hunting and fighting, so their leader concluded that 'pelt' would be a good suffix.
Ohhhh makes sense! 5/5
Age: about twenty moons
Clan: SilverClan (OC clan)
Past and Future clans: n/a
Rank: warrior
Past and Future ranks: kit, apprentice
Appearance: Rainpelt is a smoky grey cat. they have pine green eyes, dark grey paws, tail tip, and underbelly. small light grey spots and on the head and on the back. their tail is long and slim.
Cool, 18/20
Scent: rainpelt smells like warm, musky vole and heather.
Makes sense since he likes rolling in heather! 5/5
Personality: rainpelt is a very combative cat. they will argue someone over every single little thing. they like to get their way, and when they dont, it does not turn out very well. around family and friends, they are very mellow and the jokester of the family. they give stellar advice but are a hypocrite because rainpelt never follows it.
He has a very clear personality! His personality has a great balance of positive and negative traits. 20/20
Likes: hunting, rolling in ferns/heather, climbing trees, eating, arguing
That's very unique! 5/5
Dislikes: sparrows (they hate sparrows with a fierce passion), getting wet, rain(despite their prefix)
Cool! 5/5
Family:
Mother: Smallfoot; Father: Nutspring; Littermates: Bellafrost (she) and Honeyflare (she). they also have extended family since Bellafrost has kits and Nutsping and Smallfoot both have littermates.
Bellafrost is a very unique and unusual name! Cool, 4/5
Friends: Only one: Bramblefrost
Okay, 5/5
Enemies: Needleclaw
Cool, 5/5
Rivals: n/a, although they compete with their father over getting more prey
Ah...5/5
Backstory: born on a rainy night, rainpelt lost their littermate to a storm. they grew up questioning their gender and sexuality, striving to be different, and finally challenged their pronouns in front of their leader, calling Riverstar out for calling them 'he' and saying that he was non-binary. rainpelt was treated with more respect since then.
This is a great backstory! Though maybe more detail, like why he wanted to be different, or why Needleclaw is his enemy? Other than that, great! 15/20
92/100
In conclusion, Rainpelt is an awesome OC! He has a great balance of traits in his personality, and he definitely is an unique cat! I'd like it if there was a little more detail, but of course, these are just one person's opinions, so you can ignore these.
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