BlueOakStar2 [Contest 16]

BlueOakStar2 entry. Let's grade it with the rubric!

Title - 10/10 points
Yes! The title is there!
Point Range: 5/5 points for correct spelling, 5/5 points for it being there.

Author - 5/5 points
Your gave credit to the wonderful author.
Point Range: 1/1 point for correct spelling, 4/4 points for it being there.

Cat - 5/5 points
The cat that you chose is wonderful – the way you portrayed it was even more awesome!
Point Range: 3/3 points for correct pelt color, 2/2 points for correct eye color.

Your Name - 5/5 points
Your name is there! I would've liked it if it would've been placed more pleasingly (I feel as though it's just in a random spot on the cover, while every other word is centered on the cover), but I mean, you've got it on the cover at least.
Point Range: 3/3 points for having your username on the cover, 2/2 points for making it less noticeable.

Visually Pleasing - 16/20 points
This is a truly delightful cover to look at, and definitely pleasing to look at. I love the way you used the word 'poisonous' as a light source that shines on Cloudrunner and creates a shadow – it's almost as if you're telling the entire story right on the cover! The only thing that I disliked about this cover was the size of the title 'Oleandar', was well as the font for 'Warriors'. I feel as though the two words put together didn't fit (the fonts, I mean), and although they are both the same color, they kind of contrast against each other too much. I would also dim the lightness of the red that you used for the author, as it's too bright in my opinion. Other than that, this cover was really nice!
Point Range: 20 points for being visually pleasing!

Creativity - 15/15 points
Truly creative! Enough said here.
Point Range: 5/5 points for not looking like a warriors cover, 10/10 points for utter creativity!

Color Consistency - 20/20 points
Colors are consistent, though in the future, you should definitely check that the fonts you use and the colors that they have match with the rest of the cover's words.
Point Range: 20/20 points for good color consistency.

Neatness - 19/20 points
All I would say is the thing about your name and it's placement.
Point Range: 5/5 points for fitting the Wattpad format, 4/5 points for visually pleasing format of words, 5/5 points for having a good image (not blurry, respectful of the theme), 5/5 points for having all things on the cover.

Warriors - 5/5 points
Yes, warriors is on there!
Point Range: 5/5 points for having the word Warriors on the cover.

Late or Not Late - 5/5 points
Not late!
Point Range: 5/5 points for having the cover turned in on time.

OVERALL SCORE
95/100 = A

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