Asteria027 [Contest 16]
Asteria027 entry. Let's grade it with the rubric!
Title - 5/10 points
The title is there, but is unfortunately misspelled.
Point Range: 0/5 points for correct spelling, 5/5 points for it being there.
Author - 5/5 points
The author is there, but somehow it seems to be part of the title?
Point Range: 1/1 point for correct spelling, 4/4 points for it being there.
Cat - 5/5 points
The cat is there, but for some reason, the eyes seem a little unrealistic to me. Is that just me?
Point Range: 3/3 points for correct pelt color, 2/2 points for correct eye color.
Your Name - 5/5 points
Your name is there!
Point Range: 3/3 points for having your username on the cover, 2/2 points for making it less noticeable.
Visually Pleasing - 5/20 points
I like the effort that you've put into this cover, though there are a couple things I would like to point out for improvement in the future. First, we can start off with the title; I noticed that you put the author's name right under 'Warriors' and then you put the actual title below it, 'Oleander'. Because the author is right above the title, it seems like the two are the title, so the title is 'KoiiFiish Oleander'. For future covers you make, make sure that the author is clearly a separate entity. Second, the placement, font, and color of the words; for the gray and white background that you use, the color of the words that you put on this cover seem too vibrant compared to it. Try using colors that match with the background picture rather than things that stand out in an odd way. I would also suggest using colors that aren't difficult to read – for example, the quote is written in a light pink that makes it hard to read on the white/gray background. Finally, the theme and the cat – the cat is placed on a colored background circle, which is on a uncolored background. This makes the cover unstable. The colors that you use also suggest a more light-hearted theme compared to the dark and mysterious theme that we are going for in this cover. You might also want to check for the consistency of the fonts you use, to make sure they fit well together. Good job for the effort, though.
Point Range: 5/20 points for being visually pleasing!
Creativity - 9/15 points
Fairly creative, though it is getting a little close to what a warriors cover might look like.
Point Range: 2/5 points for not looking like a warriors cover, 7/10 points for utter creativity!
Color Consistency - 5/20 points
Colors aren't very consistent, and don't really fit the theme very well.
Point Range: 5/20 points for good color consistency.
Neatness - 11/20 points
Like I said, look at the font and font colors as well as getting a image that is respectful of the theme.
Point Range: 5/5 points for fitting the Wattpad format, 0/5 points for visually pleasing format of words, 1/5 points for having a good image (not blurry, respectful of the theme), 5/5 points for having all things on the cover.
Warriors - 5/5 points
Yes, warriors is on there!
Point Range: 5/5 points for having the word Warriors on the cover.
Late or Not Late - 5/5 points
Not late!
Point Range: 5/5 points for having the cover turned in on time.
OVERALL SCORE
50/100 = F
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