Bad example-
Name: Crystalpelt
Not realistic
Age: 10 moons
Too young to be a warrior
Gender: She-cat
Not bad but most OCs are she-cats
Looks: Beautiful white she-cat with perfect ginger patches and brilliant blue eyes with a tinge of purple
Not even possible
Personality: Extremely strong, brace, smart, and fast. The best Hunter and fighter in the clan. Every tom would die to have her
What....uh, I....😶
Clan: Thunderclan
A little too overused
Rank: Warrior
Too young!!!!!!
Family; All her family died when she was two weeks old
That's not possible!
Crush: Barkstar
...
Mate: Barkstar
Nonsense
Kits: expecting
😡
Backstory: was born in Thunderclan and grieved for moons when her family died. She became an apprentice and proved to be the best so she became a warrior immediately.
Horrible
This gets a 1/20

Ruled-
Please be realistic

No Mary Sues or Gary Stues

Don't rage on the score I give you

Don't take the score seriously

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