So, this is my first story! I hope it's good!

There once was a lonely stick in the forest.
Among the trees, inside of leaves, is where it lived.

But one day, a bird flew in. The stick wanted a friend terribly, so it tried to communicate with the bird. But before the stick could speak, the tree shook. The bird had flown away in fear.

Stick fell down from the tree. A black she-cat and a golden tom snorted.

"Just a stick?" The she-cat asked, her green eyes getting duller.

The golden tom groaned. "We failed to catch prey again!"

The two cats walked away, their heads down low.

But then, a blue-eyed gray tom was collecting herbs for the medicine den. He came across the stick, lying in the grass. All Alone.

Just like me... The gray tom thought to himself. He picked the stick up.

"Thank you! Oh, thank you!" the stick said. "I'm Stick, what's your name?"

"Jayfeather." the tom replied.

3 Comments:

Jayfeather_Bird: So did you like it?

1 hour ago

2 replies

Hollyleaf_Berry: It was decent.
1 hour ago

Lionblazefire: All I can say is that you will improve someday.
12 minutes ago