Hello! Firestar here! Today, we will be reading "The Rise of Fireclan". The fanfic's words will be normal, while mine will be bold like this! So, let's begin!

We are starting with the description.

When Firestar gets exiled I was never exiled by Fakestar, Fakestar? he sets off to create his own clan. Okay... It is called Fireclan! Not a bad name... Everyone has the prefix 'Fire'! That's just wrong!

Characters: Argh. This disturbs me for some awkward reason.

FAKECLAN

Leader: Fakestar- Awesome cute cool nice tom with grass green lime fur. Ummm... the missing commas...

Deputy: Uglyexile- A mean she-cat who was exiled from a rouge group

Medicine Cat: Vengeanceclaw- A fearless gray tom who has giant muscles. Is also a warrior who will tear your face off. I'm sorry.

Warriors:

Unknownfur- A she-cat with a mysterious fur color

Firestar- Uncool, mean, rude, really should Be imprisoned. First of all, I have the star suffix. I should be a leader. Second, why should I be imprisoned?

Iamimprisoningfirestar- Prison guard tom who keeps Firestar in his cell What the mouse-dung?

Prologue :DDD

Firestar was chained up in his jail cell. But, he managed to escape one lonely night. That's actually the prologue. Nothing else.

Chapter 1:

Firestar had powers since when? and he force-fed cats fox droppings until they joined his new Fireclan

This was it. They did put Fireclan cats though.

Fireclan

Leader: Firestar- Ugly Ginger tom with gross scarred green eyes why am I ugly? ;-;

Deputy: Firescar- Handsome tabby tom with ugly scars covering his pretty body so he looks weird Hold my prey-

Warriors:

Firedung- A she-cat who looks like a fox covered in fox-dung Hey! Be nice to her!

Firetear- A sad gray tom who was forced to join Wasn't every cat in this clan forced to join?

Fireheat- A warm white she-cat with fire eyes

Queens:

Firefire- Extremely pretty she-cat with a taboo name.

Elders:

There are ndjdhehdn none okay...?

Rogues:

Fireexile- Exiled mix gender tom she-cat Okay I'm done with this book

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