Name: Echosky

Nice, pretty creative 7/10

Name reasoning: I don't really know why she was given the prefix Echo, but she was given the suffix "Sky" to symbolize freedom. (more info in backstory)

I like the reasoning for "sky" a lot, but could you come up with something for the prefix? 3/5

Appearance: A white tabby with large, light brown spots. She's kinda small and her tail has a light brown tip. Her tail is almost always pointed upwards. Her eyes are a shade of dark gray. Echosky is a short-hair, but her underside is really fluffy. 

Nice, a bit of extra detail there. Maybe paw size and how her eyes appear? 3/5

Personality: Really feisty, but she has a kind heart. She has a strong will. Echosky is bold, and not shy at all. She rushes ahead a lot, often without a plan. Even though she isn't shy, it's really hard for her to make friends, because Echosky is really good at making conversations awkward. 

Haha, that sounds like a mix between myself and Sandpaw. A bit more detail would be nice, but good job otherwise. 7/10

Mate: Dusklight, a light gray short-hair tom with darker gray flecks. He is very quiet, but when called on he knows what to do. 

NEEDS MORE DETAIL! Paw size, eye color, more on the personality. 1/5

Kits: Wishkit, a shy female who is a white tabby with dark gray spots, Willowkit, a female who is basically a mini version of Echosky (personality and everything), Pebblekit, a tom who looks like Dusklight and is a big show-off, and Drizzlekit, a plain, quiet, light brown tom. 

Throw me in as Drizzlekit and you wouldn't notice. Otherwise.... MORE DETAIL (Not trying to be rude) 2/5

Friends: Like I said, she doesn't have many, but her two best friends are her sisters, Fawntail (A quiet shorthaired light brown female with white flecks and a short tail) and Sweetbush, (A loudmouth shorthaired light brown female with darker brown stripes.)

Still need the basics, eye color, fur length. Otherwise, nice. 5/10

Gender: Female

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Sexuality: Straight

Coolio

Flaws: A hothead and runs into things without thinking.

YES! FLAWS! I HAVE AN ABUNDANCE OF THOSE!

Skills: A really good fighter

Cool, anything else? 

Clan: ThunderClan 

MY FAVORITE! I used to like Windclan, and then Onestar happened. 5/5

Rank: Young warrior

Could've just said warrior, but okie. 5/5

Favorite place: The training hollow

Be a bit more descriptive? 2/5

Hobby: Doing self-made challenges for fun

Now THAT'S original. I wouldn't have ever thought of that. 5/5

Family: Mother: Sundrop (A small she-cat who is light brown with white flecks), she has two sisters, Fawntail and Sweetbush (As I said above), and an unknown father. (Echosky suspects her mother broke the code, as Sundrop lied to them.)

AHHHHHHH MORE DETAIL!!! thanks for the extra though. 4/10

Backstory: She grew up with her two sisters and was mentored by Spottedfish (An orange tabby tom with dark spots). During her apprentice era, she was banished by Bramblestar's impostor and sent into the back woods. Dusklight, a new warrior, was sent with her. Angry at first, Echopaw learned to survive. She fought rogues and became friends with loners. Dusklight became her mentor and she passed her apprentice test with flying colors, Dusklight naming her Echosky, in honor of her freedom from the clan. She fell in love with Dusklight and they had their kits. However, when leaf-bare came, the kits were weak because of lack of food. Echosky and Dusklight, knowing that chances of death were high, returned back to ThunderClan. Bramblestar turned them down, but the other cats brought them in secretly for care. When Bramblestar was fixed up, Dusklight and Echosky came out of hiding. Dusklight died as a senior warrior of a bad injury, and Echosky was killed in a battle aganist ShadowClan during her time as deputy.

Alright, so she's a dead cat? That's sad. Good detail though! And Hardships! Nice! 10/15

Sorry if I was a bit to harsh or came off as mean. I didn't mean to!

Final score....... 60/100! Not our highest, but still good (It's higher than I got with @SpringAndTheWing )! Detail would be nice, and I gave you an extra point for making me laugh with the kit's and Echosky's descriptions.

Loking forwards to other's OC's!

-Maple