Name: Chestnutclouds

That is long... and original! I like it. I would honestly name Princess something like this if she had decided to join the clans. 8/10

Prefix Meaning: Her fur reminded her parents of chestnutsSuffix Meaning: The dappled spots on her pelt resemble clouds

That's not very detailed, but I understand it.... 3/5

Appearance: A fluffy chestnut brown she-cat with white dappled spots on her coat. Her paws are average size, but her ears are a bit bigger that regular cats. Her eyes are forest green mixed with some light green, like the color of grass.

Fur length, tail length? Detail. 2/5

Personality: She is fiercely loyal to her Clan. She's caring and brave, but if she doesn't agree with you when what you say is right, she can be quite stubborn although she knows that you're right. She always tries to find a less violent way to solve a problem.

Sounds like a Fireheart mixed with a me........... Nice. 6/10

Mate: None

K 5/5

Kits: None

Mhm 5/5

Friends in the Clan:Needlecreek - A fluffy gray she-cat with tiny streaks of white in her fur and green eyes with a tiny tint of tree bark brown.Gingerfire - A flame-colored she-cat with amber eyes and white 'sock' patterns on her legs.

No male friends? That's too bad. More detail needed though. 4/10

Sexuality: Lesbian

*20 memes suddenly pop into my head*. I may have also mentioned something about not supporting Lesbians...... but I wont not do this OC. No screaming please. 

Flaws: When tensions are high, she can be very skittish, but she tries to put on a brave face for her Clanmates

K

Skills: She's a great hunter and an exceptional fighter.

Mhm

Clan: AmberClan - A Clan that lives in the marshes and live on frogs, fish and salmanders.

Could have been a bit more detailed: Surrounding clans, predators, that kind of stuff. Also, Amberclan seems to be a pretty common Fanfiction clan name. 3/10

Rank: Deputy

Ok. 5/5

Favorite place: There is a little meadow that AmberClan won over a fight with BeeClan. She likes to go there to clear her head.

Ah, a surrounding clan. Okay, what does she like about the meadow? 4/5

Favorite Hobby: She loves to teach the kits of her Clan some techniques to hunt and battle in advance, so they can surprise their mentors.

Ah, I really like this one. 5/5

Family:Mother: Doepelt - A brown she-cat with amber eyes and gray and white dapples on her fur. She was killed in a skirmish with BranchClanFather: Puddletrout - A dark brown tom with green eyes. His fur is streaked with white and silver. He is alive.Sister: Mudskip - A light brown she-cat with black stripes and white tipped ears and yellow eyes. She is alive.

RIP her mom. And another surrounding clan! More detail needed. 6/10

Backstory: Chestnutkit was born in a turbulent time. The 5 Clans: BeeClan, BranchClan, AmberClan, AloeClan and NettleClan, were all at war with each other. AmberClan was having much trouble with BeeClan and they desperately needed cats to fight. Chestnutkit and Mudkit were born during a battle with BeeClan, where BeeClan had ambushed AmberClan's camp. The Clan managed to drive BeeClan out, but many warriors were lost and the others were severely wounded. The medicine cat, Embersky, saw the birth of the kits as a sign from MoonClan (Their version of StarClan) that they would survive. Sparrowmoon, the leader of AmberClan, doubted the medicine cat's words, but he had already fallen ill by then. Soon enough, Chestnutkit and Mudkit were little troublemakers. Their parents were always amused by their antics. Then, they became apprentices and trained. Their first battle came very soon in the form of BranchClan. By then, Chestnutpaw and Mudpaw already knew about the vicious war and knew this was a war patrol. Doepelt was with them when BranchClan attacked and she was killed by the BranchClan deputy, Aphidbite. Chestnutpaw attacked Aphidbite in a blind rage and tore out his eye. Doepelt was mourned, mostly by Puddletrout, Mudpaw and Chestnutpaw. The day came for Chestnutpaw and Mudpaw's warrior ceremony. They became Chestnutclouds and Mudskip. A few moons after their ceremony, Chestnutclouds was asked by Sparrowmoon to lead a patrol to BeeClan's meadow and attack. He was on the verge of dying and she didn't want the last emotion he'd ever feel before death to be disappointment, so she led a patrol to the meadow and met the old BranchClan deputy, Aphidbite. He had been exiled for killing the leader and now he was in BeeClan. Chestnutclouds avenged her mother and killed Aphidbite. AmberClan won the meadow. A meeting was called for all the Clans and a truce was made, ending the war forever. After the meeting, Chestnutclouds was made deputy for her bravery during the war.

Okay, this is a bit too much "Kit is born from sign and then does great things", but is a pretty good summary of her life so far. A bit of hardship would've been nice, but other than that it's pretty good. 12/15

Okay! So, Chestnutclouds!

A pretty good OC, but giving her some more flaws and skills would be nice. Adding more detail would give others a greater understanding of your OC.

Final score is........ 68/100! Pretty Good!

-Maple