Contest Entree (#8): cutekitteh1111
"Longtail! No!" I screamed to the old, blind tom. I had no choice but to fall back for him. He was an elder an he wouldn't make it without me. "I just need to find Mousefur-" he started as he strolled back to the Elder's den. His tail waved in a calm, paced way. Only his ears and paws can guide him. I could feel the raindrops on my pelt as I darted to the Elder's den, where Longtail was.
"Briarpaw come back!" I heard my mother called for me. I ignored my mother's wailing and paced out to Longtail.
Longtail stood in front of the Elder's den. Mousefur's head popped out of the den and she walked out, she stretched as she blinked as if she took a nap. "What is it?" She didn't seem to notice that all the clan cats evacuated out of camp without her.
"Come on Mousefur! We have to go!" Longtail urged to Mousefur. Mousefur nodded and we started to walk away from the den. Mousefur padded away as I stop in my tracks.
Where was Longtail?
Longtail wasn't with Mousefur, rushing away. There was only one thing he could be doing.
Getting Mousefur's prey!
I remembered the words that Firestar said during a clan meeting. "Attention cats of ThunderClan, the rain seems to be pouring and the big tree might fall down, we must leave immediately,"
"Longtail! Stop! We must get out of here!" I screeched at the pale, blind tom he murmured out, Must get her prey.
A sound of a tree snapping. My ears rang as I jumped straight at Longtail. "Long-" a pain went over my back and onto my hind legs. "tail........" I was breathless. I let the darkness take over.
-----------
Fluttering my eyes open, I see a starry image of a pale warrior. He stood as his paws were right at my face. "Am I dead? Am I in StarClan?" I asked the starry image.
"No... He meowed and shirted his glowing eyes. "Tell Mousefur I'm sorry,"
-----------
"Mhmggg," Opening my eyes in a flash, I saw the blind blue eyes of Jayfeather. His blind eyes reminded me of Longtail. "Briarpaw!" She purred as she rubbed her head again You're alive," Jayfeather meowed. He narrowed his eyes onto me. He didn't show any emotion with his words. Being a medicine cat, he should be comforting me.
"What happened to Longtail?" I whispered, enough for Millie to hear. Millie's eyes turn from worried to sorrow. "He's dead,"
Dead?
"It's my fault," I murmured. No one responded. I remember the words of the mysterious StarClan warrior. "Where's Mousefur? I need to see her..." I croaked out. My throat had liquids running up.
Millie and Jayfeather exchanged looks. Jayfeather bolted to me, his blind eyes locked onto mine. His eyes had disapointment, yet sadness mixed in. "Your legs are crippled,"
The look in his eyes reminded me of how the StarClan warrior looked at me.
Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: AzTruyen.Top