For @Brackenheart4. Next oc will be Snowdust.

Name: Twistedfoot formally Runningkit

Ah, Running- is very cute. Twistedfoot does make sense, and both Twisted- and -foot are underused.

But her mother is a butt. I never liked naming cats after their disabilities. Like hello Rainflower, you again?

Gender: She-cat

Ok :S

Clan: WindClan

My favorite :D

Rank: Formor WindClan warrior now part of StarClan

Ah, she died :(

Backstory: Was born right before leaf bare and in a middle of a war. Her mother hated how she had a disability and forces her clan to dislike her due to her being 'weak'. Due to this she never played making her lack muscle and is small due to be being feed once every 2 days. One day she had snuck outside and met Stone paw and and Harepaw. When she is around her 4th moon her mother and brother hurt her and she becomes depressed due to her family hating her alongside most of her clan. As an apprentice she's renamed to Twistedpaw. One day in a battle she was fighting a apprentice but was losing. She was about to die bit Harepaw bow Harefrost jumps on the apprentice and later dies. This makes her more depressed. On her assessment she catch two pieces of prey and can beat Thornpaw. She thought she was going to be a warrior but was held back for 3 moons. That night her brother now Tunnelstrike convinced her to kill herself. She tried to by falling off the gorge edge but Stonestep had saved her. From then on she began developing a crush for the She-cat and thanks to her help she became a warrior. The day after she brings her out of camp and admits her love for Stonestep and shockingly Stonestep had admitted she was the most beautiful cat she had net and they became mates. They lived 3 happy moons and on patrol they found a 4 moon kit. They adopted Twig. Around 5 moons later ThunderClan attacked. She fought along her family bit she couldn't save Stonestep from the claws of the ThunderClan leader. After that day she became depressed her mate dead. She waited to her son's to became a warrior. A day after she killed herself and rejoined her mate.

This is great! So sad. I've never seen someone have an oc that killed themselves before :( it was a realistic reaction to a very tragic backstory D:

This is really heartbreaking. But everything about it was quite unique, it was very nice. Good job.

Personality: Often depressed accept around her friends and adopted son. Very shy and can have suicidal thoughts. Very caring and can be happy but only around a few cats. Slowly became proud of herself and is very selfless.

I like this. You don't see this that often in ocs. I love the way that she becomes proud of herself in the end. Very nice :3

Appearance: Light brown tabby with dark brown stripes and light brown paws. Dark yellow eyes.

This is alright. Brown tabbies are way overused. She's light brown with light brown paws ? The dark yellow eyes are nice, but I think it would be nice if she had a more unique fur pattern.

Mate: Stonestep(Light grey she-cat with dark grey paws and speckles. Copper eyes)

Digging the lesbian cats :D

I like Stonestep a lot. The speckles are nice, and I love copper eyes.

Kit: Adopted Twigeye (Light brown with a white belly. One blue and one yellow)

The 2 eye colors is cliche, but I love the name. Twig- and -eye are underused.

Mother: Ashstar (Dark grey with white spots. Blue eyes )

She became leader? Ew! WindClan, what's good?

Father: Branchleap ( Dark brown tom with light brown stripes. Yellow orange eyes)

I love the prefix Branch! I'm curious, why is he not mentioned in her backstory? Did he hate Twisted too?

Brother: Tunnelstrike (Dark brown with white spots. Large and broad shouldered. Very thin fur and long tail. Amber eyes )

Another name I like. Tunnel is very odd, but kinda cool. I like him.

·~*OVERALL*~·
9/10! This is a very miserable cat, but.. in a good way. I love her, but I think it would be nice if she had a more unique appearance. I'd also like to know about her father. Other than that, this is really good.