For @treeclan. Next oc will be Windsong.

Name: Treestep

Tree- isn't used very often. -step is overused, but I haven't seen this name before. I think it's cool. It would make sense for his name to be Tree Step, because ancient cats had names like that. But these are original Clans, so I suppose it's different.

Age: 25 moons (At the time of The Fall Of OakClan)

Pretty young, I like it.

Clan: OakClan (Later creates TreeClan after Hellstar's reign and OakClan splits into two)

Hellstar? I don't think the warriors know what hell is. But anyway, I like OakClan more than TreeClan, but oh well.

Gender: Tom

Rank: Medicine Cat

You don't see many medicine cats that become leaders. This is very cool.

Appearance: small brown thick set tabby tom with white paws and copper eyes

Brown tabby and white is overused, but at least he isn't plain brown. Bonus points for the copper eyes, they're underused.

Personality: Treestep's orders are always followed, but he is not exactly intimidating. He tends to get nervous and panic very easily when under pressure and/or scared. On the brighter side, he isn't very shy and is quite chatty (leading him to get distracted easily) and is good company.

This is perfect. I wouldn't change anything about it. You don't see many jittery/nervous leaders, so I love this.

Backstory: Treestep was born and raised in OakClan with his close friends Hawkfire, Raintail, Leafstorm, Owleyes and Brackenfoot. He chose the path of a medicine cat. After Rosestar's death, an ambitious cat named Hellfire became leader instead of Hawkfire. He changed everything- kits were trained at three moons, elders were forced back into the warrior life or exiled, queens were forced to do warrior duties even if they were expecting kits or nursing kits etc. His close friends stood up to Hellstar but three were executed (their eyes were gouged out, claws ripped out and then were attacked by Hellstar's supporters, if you wanted the details). Then Hawkfire and Raintail were exiled not long after (They found their own territory and created HawkClan and RainClan) therefore him being a witness of the horror he became a little jumpy and panicky. After Hellstar dies, the clan splits into two and become DawnClan and TreeClan. They move into the territory with RainClan and HawkClan. (Please note this is a very brief description, if you want extra details just ask)

Hello Brokenstar

Anywa, nice. Why was Hellfire made leader instead of Hawkfire? Oh well, this is pretty cool. I like it a lot, even tho I don't know all of the details.

Mate?: No, I dislike the cliche medicin cat in love scenario. But later on in his life yes

Good, no cliches here. What is his mate's name?

Kits?: No, duh. Later on in his life yes

What are their names????

Crush?: a small one, but nothing happens. Later in his life he gets a mate when he is Treestar

Okay, what is his crush's name?

·~*OVERALL*~·
9/10, he's pretty cool. I think you should include his mate and kits, how/when he met his mate, etc. That's all really. Also, cats don't know what hell is...