For @TheSilverSunset. Next oc will be Roselight.

Name: Storm Clouds/ Cloudysky

Neither of these names are very unique. Storm is used very often. Cloudy- isn't a very common prefix, I like it more than Cloud. But Cloudysky is used often, and while these names are cute, they aren't unique..

Gender: she-cat

Of course..

Apearence: Very pale gray she-cat with white paws and tail, dark gray ears, chest, and underbwlly, and black mask and tail-tip, bright golden eyes

This is great! It does fit her name very well. Gray is a bit overused, but the patterns are very cool. I love the black, light gray and dark gray. It really gives the appearance of a storm. Even better, her eyes are gold, almost like the sun peeking through the clouds :D and gold eyes aren't seen very often, so good job.

Personality: quiet, unconfident, when pressured she panics, and always thinks she has to prove her loyalty

Not the most original personality. A lot of peoples' ocs are quiet and shy, but at least she has flaws. It's realistic, just overused.

Clan: Tribe Of The Setting Sun. CederClan

Cool. I like Tribe cats.. um that's all.

Backstory: She was born to Cave Shadows and Smoky Cloud, she had no siblings. Her tribe was destroyed by an avalanche from the mountains. Only she, a kit, a queen, and two warruors survived. ( Speckle Sky, Bright Rose, Sand Stripe, Flying Eagle)
They ventured until they came to CederClan. They joined and Storm Clouds became Cloudysky. She befriended a lonely tom named Jayfang, and rejected him as a mate. She then said yes to a tom named Deerleap, and had his kits. She then went back to Jayfang after Deerleap died in battle. Jayfang abandoned her for Sparrowsong, and she quickly moved on to Slightchest. They had kits but two of the four died. The two survied, but only one made it to be a warrior. Slightchest was killed by a badger and Cloudysky found out she had one more litter. She had two toms, and raised them with her close friend, Shadewhisker. They stayed friends until they both died in the elders den from the same bout of green cough.

Nice! You don't see this happen often. I like how her backstory focuses mostly on her mates and kits, queens with multiple litters are normally neglected. Good job, I like this.

Mates: Deerleap, Jayfang, Slightchest

She had THREE mates. Hello, Crowfeather.

Kits:
Deerleap: Berrylight, Cloudpatch, Stormlight
Jayfang: Emberflight, Songbird, Fogshade
Slightchest:Applekit, Silverkit, Dapplepaw, Brightdapple, Badgerstripe , and Cherryface.

LOTS OF KITTENS.

Other: 1. CederClan borders a mountain and patrols go there, but the deputy never makes her go there because she has a fear of mountains after the avalanche.
2. Cloudysky feels like she has to prove herself over and over
As a to be, she had a crush on a tom named Lark Shadow. She tried to help him escape but he died in from of her.

That's tragic :( so that's almost FOUR mates. jeez.

Also, the part about the mountains is cool.

·~*OVERALL*~·
She's pretty cool! 7/10, she isn't the most original character. The only thing that really stood out here was her appearance.