For @TheEntireStarClan. Next oc will be Owlheart.

Name: Scorchleaf

This is nice. You don't see Scorch- very often. Leaf is pretty overused, but it's still very cute, and personally I love it. I haven't seen this name before, so great job on that.

Gender: tom

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Appearance: black with light ginger stripes and orange ears, gray eyes.

Very cool. I've never seen a black cat with lighter stripes, but I suppose they do exist. Black and ginger is an awesome combination, and the gray eyes add to his appearance a lot. This also goes with his name, so good job on that.

Clan: SkyClan

Wooooo

Rank: Medicine Cat

Oh, another medicine guy! I love them. You know who I especially love? Littlecloud. The Erins are going to kill him off soon, I know it. It makes me so sad. I hope they give him a moment of glory before he goes *sobs*

Personality: he was fun, before he received an important prophecy, but after that he became hushed and quiet, hardly ever leaving his den. He often gets off track.

At first these didn't seem like major flaws to me, but now that I think about it, he is a medicine cat. Getting off track could put his Clan in danger.

Great job on this :3

Backstory: Not too much here. I'm seeing what I need to fix before I publish this story. But anyway, he was the first SkyClan medicine cat to hear of the prophecy about the forest being destroyed. He heard the prophecy when was on in his moons, so he died shortly after the story begins, and it mainly takes place in StarClan. He gives it to every Medicine cat, even the ones that he didn't train, and even went mad in StarClan. Eventually he was talking to himself, when he walked past the StarClan border into the Dark Forest one. He ran into a very faded One Eye, and got himself killed again.

I like this!! You see very few stories that take place in StarClan. I love this a lot. Wouldn't really change it a bit. You didn't mention that he was mad in his personality, but oh well.

·~*OVERALL*~·
I give it aaaa.... 10/10!! There isn't really anything that I would change about him. He's super cool. And, I love his backstory a LOT.

Forgot to mention this before you guys, but I've written down every oc that gets 10/10. At the end of this book, I'll post them all, so you can see my most favorite ocs. So far, we have Frostedtoe, Reedsnap, Lionbramble, and now Scorchleaf.