For @TheLadyAvanne. next oc will be Stoneheart. Sorry I haven't updated for a few days, it's coming to the end of the school year and I'm behind in my work so I've been focusing much more on that.

Roselight

I like this. Rose-, in my opinion, is very overused. You don't see -light as often, I'd say it's... somewhat overused. I haven't seen this particular name before, but Rose and light are pretty common.

She cat

Well, Roselight is a very feminine name.

Light cream she cat with ginger dapples.

Cream cats, I've seen, are becoming more and more popular. However, the ginger dapples add a very unique pattern to her appearance. Cream and ginger isn't a common combination, and it isn't very realistic, but it is beautiful.

BUT WHAT COLOR ARE HER EYES?

She was the runt of her litter and is very undersized, but makes up for it in speed and skill.

(I'm not sure if this was supposed to be in the appearance part or the personality part..... Oops?)

A lot of people make their oc the runt, but I like this.

She is sharp at first, and very sensitive about her size. She can be snappy and a bit abrasive, but is a loyal warrior and a strong Hunter and a cunning fighter. She works twice as hard as everycat to make up for her small stature, and she feels like she has to constantly keep proving herself worthy of a place in the clan. She has a soft spot inside, but only really opens up to a few very close friends, and she will fight to protect her friends, and clan.

This is a long personality. Oh well, I love it! Very descriptive. I like how you have a reason for her being small, it makes her a much more interesting character.

I use her for rps, but OakClan I guess

Okay :P

She was born to an OakClan Queen and her father died before she was born, and she was so small, the medicine cat thought she wasn't going to survive, her other sister was stillborn and she has one living brother. After a few hours, her mother died of blood loss and grief (she lost the will to live after her mate, and kit died, plus she thought Roselight was going to die) Roselight grew up with a close bond to her brother but always felt like she had to prove herself.

This is good, but most of her backstory is only about being born. Surely there was some sort of major event after that? I'd like more info on her backstory.

Mate/kits none

:(

Kin: Gingerstrike (mother-deceased) Brackenflame (father-deceased) Birchfrost (brother) Snowykit (sister-deceased)

Love these names!

·~*OVERALL*~·
She's pretty good, 8/10. Her name isn't the most unique, and I'd like to know more about her backstory. Other than that, good job!