For @PuddleStormStories. Next oc will be Nettlestar.

I like how you put hearts all over. Idk why you did, but I like it. Cute.

"♡Puddlestorm

This is cute! Puddle- isn't used very often, so good job on that. -storm is overused, but in this name, it's very adorable.

♡She-Cat

Of course ...

♡All white she-cat with a black "puddle-like" spot on her back with green eyes

Green eyes are overused. But I like this appearance, it's very simple. It fits her name well, and I love it.

♡Rippleclan/Mistclan(read book to find out why there's two)

Shameless self promotion, I see.

I like these Clans.

♡Warrior/Queen

Nice :3

♡Bouncy, loves and craves attention, makes bad(but funny) puns, teases brother Barkclimb, stubborn, changes moods quickly, humorous, and almost always happy!

This is a great personality! She has some flaws, but not too many. I like how she is attention-seeking, you don't see that much. I love it.

♡PuddleStorm originally had two brothers, Barkclimb and Harekit. Harekit, ironically, was taken by an eagle in her old Rippleclan territory. Puddlestorm was hurt for a long time but pulled herself out and swore to never let anything get to her again. She went with Mistyfeather and Shadetalon to the southern territory to format Mistclan with her brother, Barkclimb, and her mate, Breezefoot.

This is kinda confusing. Why did they form a new Clan? Did they just want to? Wat? Was MistClan named after Mistyfeather?

Other than that, I like it. The part about Harekit was very realistic because of how she suffered from it.

♡Mate-Breezefoot

Simple name. He must be fast..

♡Daughter-Cedarpool
♡Son-Timberfall

I love these names.

·~*OVERALL*~·
I give her 9/10. I think you just need to add a bit more to her backstory, and she'll be great !!!