For @-Squirrelblaze-. Next oc will be Dreamrunner. I only have like 8 left to do until I'm done with this and I can open the form again!! Excited

"Name: Poppyfall

This is alright. Poppy- is one of my favorite prefixes! -fall is a bit overused, though. I've seen the name Poppyfall a bit, so though it's cute, no points for originality :l

Gender: she-cat

Appearance: Ginger with two dark paws, a dark tail, and green eyes.

By "dark" I assume you mean darker ginger, not black? Okay. I think this is cute, I don't think I've seen a ginger oc in a while. Only problem is the green eyes, they are . . .
Overused

Clan: NightClan

Like ShadowClan?

Rank: Warrior (not a senior warrior)

So young warrior, then.

Personality: Sarcastic, does not care about troubles of other Clans, likes kits, and nervous. She is also friendly but only at Gatherings.

Hmm, okay. I like "does not care about the troubles of other Clans" because it makes her seem insensitive, but at the same time, loyal to her Clan. Very cool, and not used very often. The other character traits are more common, but the combination of them makes her really interesting. She doesn't care about the other Clans, but she is friendly at gatherings, which proves that she is a good cat.

Backstory: Her brother, Icekit, did not survive birth, so she had no living siblings. One day a patrol found a lost kit which her mother took in and named Shrewkit. Once she became a warrior, she started to wonder who her father was and overheard her father talking to her mother. She found out who he was. Then she got a mate and had kits.

Who is her father?! She found out who he was but WHO IS HE?! You can't just not tell me, man what the heck

Anyway I'm kinda confused by this. Why didn't she know who her father was? Is he a non-Clan cat? I'd like a more detailed backstory, this is very short. How did she meet her mate? Did nothing really special happen while she was an apprentice or warrior besides Shrewkit? What happens to Shrewkit, does he become a warrior?

Mate and kit's names: Her mate's name is Dustytail, a brown and gray tom with amber eyes. Her kits are Robinflight, a dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes, Icesplash, a gray tom with a brown tail and green eyes, and Squirrelblaze, a ginger she-cat with a dark brown tail and amber eyes.

Aww I love these names, Robin is a favorite prefix of mine. I also like Squirrelblaze, squirrels are my favorite animal :3

·~*OVERALL*~·
Her name isn't very original, her eye color is meh, and I have a lot of questions about her backstory. 7/10. I'd like to know who her father is mostly..